Could I get a description of the mc or a picture? I dont think he is described in the fic. I could have just forgot it though.
REEEEEEEE
3 years ago
27
Chaos_Swan_king
Amazing. I came here not hoping for much but you have my interest piqued. Some advice: gems are really faithful so I highly doubt that a harem would be possible.
3 years ago
21
hghg_Santos
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
15
Asrakal
Love the idea! and with a good editor this can be a good webnovel. but the writing is atrocious, gonna be brutally honest... this reads as if it's written by a child who's still learning english. will come back to this if there's ever a rewrite.
3 years ago
6
Ains_Ool_Gow
Eu só quero uma coisa ,... que ñ abandone esse livro , poste quando puder e se precisar de ajuda com algo sobre , eu adoraria ajudar mano , gostei muito do livro.
3 years ago
6
Ains_Ool_Gow
For you who are thinking about reading this book, please give the book a chance, I promise you will not regret it and quite the opposite will ask you why you haven't read it before, and if you can leave an honest and mainly constructive review to help the author to improve and encourage him to continue, remembering that no one gets paid to write and he / she is doing it because he likes it, so leave your pamper to the author there.
3 years ago
5
Anthony_Bernardo_4918
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3 years ago
4
AbelWizard
Eu li tudo em um dia , realmete incrível mano , adoraria ver uma cena romântica de um beijo o quanto antes. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
4
Armin_Roquet
Por el momento muy bueno este fic de steven universe, siga con el buen trabajo, más harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
3 years ago
4
Thomas_Begley
amazing I love you work it's good I also love the story and how it's going. I hope you continue and don't drop it and don't care about the haters if they come keep positive.👍♥️😁
3 years ago
4
LeylinTheFifth
Dude or Sis don't stop please , this is the only perfect Steven Universe fanfic I've found and I'm not sure I want to step on wattpad or fanfiction.com. I got no complains only that if possible please put names on the dialogue so we can see who's speaking but other than that it's all so perfect.
3 years ago
2
IsekaiAnimes
1° good chapter, 2° I liked the grammar, 3° I put and stars because I liked the fic. 😀 😃 😄 😁 😆 😆 😅 😂 🤣😊 😇 🙂 🙃 😉 😌 😍 😘 😗 😙 😚 😋 😛 😝 😜 🤪 🤨 🧐 🤓 😎 😎🤩😏
Could I get a description of the mc or a picture? I dont think he is described in the fic. I could have just forgot it though. REEEEEEEE
Amazing. I came here not hoping for much but you have my interest piqued. Some advice: gems are really faithful so I highly doubt that a harem would be possible.
Reveal Spoiler
Love the idea! and with a good editor this can be a good webnovel. but the writing is atrocious, gonna be brutally honest... this reads as if it's written by a child who's still learning english. will come back to this if there's ever a rewrite.
Eu só quero uma coisa ,... que ñ abandone esse livro , poste quando puder e se precisar de ajuda com algo sobre , eu adoraria ajudar mano , gostei muito do livro.
For you who are thinking about reading this book, please give the book a chance, I promise you will not regret it and quite the opposite will ask you why you haven't read it before, and if you can leave an honest and mainly constructive review to help the author to improve and encourage him to continue, remembering that no one gets paid to write and he / she is doing it because he likes it, so leave your pamper to the author there.
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I Love The book , the Flow of the book is beautiful. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Eu li tudo em um dia , realmete incrível mano , adoraria ver uma cena romântica de um beijo o quanto antes. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Por el momento muy bueno este fic de steven universe, siga con el buen trabajo, más harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
amazing I love you work it's good I also love the story and how it's going. I hope you continue and don't drop it and don't care about the haters if they come keep positive.👍♥️😁
Dude or Sis don't stop please , this is the only perfect Steven Universe fanfic I've found and I'm not sure I want to step on wattpad or fanfiction.com. I got no complains only that if possible please put names on the dialogue so we can see who's speaking but other than that it's all so perfect.
1° good chapter, 2° I liked the grammar, 3° I put and stars because I liked the fic. 😀 😃 😄 😁 😆 😆 😅 😂 🤣😊 😇 🙂 🙃 😉 😌 😍 😘 😗 😙 😚 😋 😛 😝 😜 🤪 🤨 🧐 🤓 😎 😎🤩😏