Because Your Love Heals Me

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Author: Pryges
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Trapped by the demons of her past, Alex Michell is a young model and businesswoman who lives her life with only one goal: to get revenge on all the people who have made her life so miserable.

Eliott Jensen is one of the most famous and wealthiest bachelors in the country. Although he is known for being a cold and ruthless businessman, he is someone who can give up everything for the people he loves...



Deeply hurt in the past by her loved one, Alex lives with the aftermath of what happened to her in the past. A psychological scar that makes her body reject any male touch.

What will happen when she meets the one man who seems to make her breathe again? Will she be able to fight her fears and give herself a chance at love?



Read on to find out if Eliott's love would be strong enough to erase Alex's scars...!!!





**NO MAJOR MISUNDERSTANDING** 18+ scenes



The country in this story is fiction, the story will take mostly place at Florelia.

Author note:

This is a story I already tried to write with the title my Healing love but it was my first time so it was poorly written. So now I'm rewriting the story again after getting some writing tips here and there.



English is not my native language so there will be some mishaps, please fill free to correct me.



Cover by my little sister

Instagram: @nkmc_zone

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SCARLETZEE
SCARLETZEE

The story is amazing! It is very well written. The character's design is so relevant. I'm so curious about the revenge. It's a good point to mention about that at the very first beginning. Just add this book into my collection. Can't wait to read more. Fighting, author nim!

3 years ago
4
Breno_Ranyere
Breno_Ranyere

I liked the idea but I'm not sure I'm very fond of the execution. The actual story honestly has a fun and interesting plot, but the way it's being told feels a little clunky. There are times when things are being described as if it was a movie script instead of a book. Things like, Alexis opened the fridge. She saw a bottle of milk. Alexis grabbed the milk. She poured some into her cup. It just feels a tad too stiff when imo it could be a little more poetic. Alexis opened the fridge while the worries of her task weighted on her shoulders. She approached the bottle of milk after putting it under her gaze as she opted to rely on its taste to rid herself of her concerns. Things like that to just make the experience less robotic. There is also an absurd reliance on terms like "beutifull, handsome, pretty". Beuty is kinda of a subjective thing and just saying "that person is beutifull" all the time kinda doesn't help me grasp why that person is beutifull. Lastly, the constant praise for Alexis feels really tiresome and ends up having the opposite effect. Its one thing to say a character is successful, it's another to just make them a perfect God in human form loved by everyone and everything. It feels like this novel is constantly trying to tell me what I should think and feel instead of letting me reach the conclusions by myself. 3 chapters in and I feel like I barely know Alexis because most of the text is about describing her instead of showing what she's like when she interacts with people. I don't want to read a description of a character, I want to see a character in action and let myself decide how I feel about her.

3 years ago
3
Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1

What a great story to read! i love it! im addicted to the first chapters! absolutely recommend it and would love to read more! the story keeps getting better!

3 years ago
3
Su_Jeong
Su_Jeong

So this book is off to a good start...Alex is an interesting character. I'm not sure how to evaluate ML yet, but he sounds decent. I like the plot and the world background. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't detract from the story. Welldone

a year ago
2
Junni_MC
Junni_MC

First of all, although the novel seemed like a cliché, it is not. It is full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are almost no grammatical errors. The creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting.

a year ago
1
Akira_Monadelle
Akira_Monadelle

The novel has a cliche storyline but this author managed to make it very unique and equally as interesting. For a non-native english speaker, the author wrote very well with little to no grammatical errors compared to some native english speakers lol. This fits in perfectly in the contemporary romance genre and has the potential to be great. [img=recommend]

3 years ago
1
_Meggie_
_Meggie_

A wonderful contemporary Romance! The characters and deep, well-developed and very lovable. The beginning is a bit slow, but it's worth it to power through those first couple chapters, because the interactions between the FL and ML are wonderful! Keep up the good work author!

3 years ago
1
Oya_Dawish
Oya_Dawish

I loved the philosophy of the novel, as a girl I fully understand what it means to lose faith in love, and in the people you love, that crisis that is so difficult to overcome later. The simple, beautiful language most characterizes the novel. It goes in harmony, makes you simply focus on and relate to events. I strongly recommended the novel I like it.

3 years ago
1
ClaisiceLouice
ClaisiceLouice

This is a well-written story with an amazing plot. I love it! The synopsis did a great job starting the vibe of the story, while every chapter will keep you asking for more. It also has well-written characters and dialogues. I love it!

3 years ago
1
Book_Pen
Book_Pen

Interesting Plot!! The writer keeps us hook with each chapter. As a suspense is revealed, another follows. Well Written!! The character design is done perfectly along with the environment details. Keep Going!!!

3 years ago
1
Dvanzy6
Dvanzy6

First of all, even though the novel looked cliched, it's not. It's full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are close to no grammatical mistakes. Creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting. The story development and it's pace is smooth. It hook's the readers interest instantly. Especially, the first chapter. All and all, the work has a great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.

3 years ago
1
Erivva
Erivva

I'm not a really great fan of modern life stories but when I read this story it felt different. The character is bold and strong and she doesn't hesitate to do the things that fell right to her, I'm looking forward to such a great story.

3 years ago
1
foxyash
foxyash

character Very well defined and loved the characters Alex, Ethan And very curious bout Elliot. Storyline Awesome and fantabolous....loved it I was very hooked n read the whole chapters....waiting for updates now. Author love u and hats off

3 years ago
1
ki_ye
ki_ye

3 years ago
1
KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1

Great story. pushed forward and made more interesting by the motivation of the lead. Keeps the readers on their toes in anticipation of what would happen next while loving what she has already done. Again, great story.

3 years ago
1