Skyrim System in Danmachi
Author: Juan_Mercado_4902
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Ethan awakens amd is greeted by ROB.
" Hey... sooo... yeah I killed you sorry. But I am compensating by dropping you into a fantasy world with a system. With no memories at that. You're welcome. Byeeee~"
" Wait, F*** YOUUUUU....." 'poof'
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This is just an idea I want to see but no one wrote about it. I'm not a good writer and would love to see someone else write this but until then you get my sh**y work. If anyone does start writing based off my idea, please let me know, I would love to read yours instead of mine.
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If any writers/authors read this, there is a simple rule to follow when writing that almost no fan fic writer, including this one, seems to follow, same with some novel writers too. The rule is 'Show don't Tell'. Instead of just 'telling' your readers, show them, e.g. instead of he walked outside and saw it was raining, you could say, stepping out onto the muddy grounds the sights of puddles of varying sizes decorated the landscape, droplets of water fell from the skies as if to drown the lands. See the difference it makes?
I liked it a lot, I hope you'll post again soon. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Are you gonna continue updating or did you drop this fan-fic?. I really like it and would love it if you keep writing. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
i think its a good story and hope it gets more updates. (i don't like giving out spoilers to story's so i never reference anything to the story i comment on.)
Great story it has promise but don't know if going to be updated but works great with the skyrim system I have not found any fanfiction with skyrim elements in it
I see why this is a failure, 1st having a system can not be realistic as it is not currently technically possible to create, 2nd If you are using the skyrim system make it exact.