This is the first time I write a novel in English. I’m just a historical nerd wanting to create a beautiful story.
It’ll be great if you guys can tell me about my grammatical mistakes
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This is the story of a modern man reincarnated into a medieval, fictional, and fantasy world.
Although he is a cripple, he has some special power that can help him to develop his land and hammer his legend into history.
I’m inspired by the legendary tale of Ivar the Boneless.
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My discord server: https://discord.gg/wqVVfeDr
Hey, it's author.I wil shamelessly rate my story five stars. I know that I am still inexperience so if you don't like my book, just rate it as your will. I welcome any suggestions that can help me increase my story. Have a nice day everyone.
It is a good story, his ability is strong but not ridiculously OP. I can see a good future for this book, as long as the author doesn't drop it.
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Pretty good thE writing quality is almost perfect but everything Else is a okay i hope you dont add harEm or love In the stroy it Would make it bad
It's a good book the only problem that is not very serious is that the author just likes little too much the Japanese weapons. ........................
This novel is a good kingdom-building novel with a cheat but it is not ridiculously powerful nor does it give the MC a lot of combat strength a few grammar mistakes here and there but apart from that a solid read. MC seems to be smart and has taken some losses against enemies. I recommend people to read it and if you don't like it drop it but honestly its seems to be a solid read and with stable updates too.
nice one I love it so much please keep updating it[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
any update??? pls continue!!! we are all waiting
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I like the plot of the story but I feel like the story go by too fast sometime. I don't really bother about the character depth so I won't say anything about that ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Enjoying the story feel that it’s going to explore more of the world and that your mc is a combination of Ragnar who wanted to explore new places and was patient and ivar who love fighting and wanted power
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