The Desperate Rights

The Desperate Rights

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Author: GorgeousSteel
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Despite having a distorted view of life,Lilian Lazaros still expecting that she can get the rights after her husband William filed a divorce with her.She hopefully wants her children beside her,even she will fight against what's right. Demetri Sylvestre,the man who allegedly ruined her marriage helps her out to claim her desperate rights against William for which he needs some selfish benefits in return.



Having amidst the two rich selfish and lunatic CEO,another man appeared obsessively to fulfill his promise towards her,which makes her life more complicated and twisted.



She's under the playful games of the three possessive fellas.But,their games turn into an irrepressible trap of love.







She married to a stupid douche.She met the selfish traitor,and she met the third guy who was sick and obsess with her.



William, " I regretted that I let her go, but I will surely regret more if I will choose to lose her forever."



Demetri, " Love? I didn't know what is love but until she came, she taught me how to be a person."



Wyndell, " I will kill myself if she choice to remarry someone over me. She's my life,and she could be my healing."



Lilian," I'm just claiming my desperate rights but those three guys appeared of destroying my drowsy soul."



" I'm confuse of choosing the right one but let the love choose the best."







Cover is not mine.



This story contains a lot of grammatical errors, sentence lapses and plot holes. Please bear with me.



This is not a kind of heavy drama story.Heavy lines at first but not so light plots on the rest.



This is my first english story and I am not good at writing english.

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GorgeousSteel
GorgeousSteel

Hi everyone, let me rate this with 5 stars as an author. Votes, reviews, comments, and gifts are highly appreciated. I would like to inform you that I am not a Native English writer. You can encounter here a lot of grammatical errors, sentence lapses, or even plot holes. I am not good at writing at least I tried. You can correct my grammar, I gladly appreciate it. Thank you 😘

3 years ago
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Nico_Aniban
Nico_Aniban

Reveal Spoiler

3 years ago
2
AnneUsual
AnneUsual

It's 2 early to rate 5 stars, but I'm an avid fan of new stories w/ an original plot twist. I am excitedly waiting for your updates...considered this review as one of the things that can boost ur confidence to write.

3 years ago
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La_Memeng
La_Memeng

I honestly, Im little bit not into this kind of story, but after all I like the flow.. It's too early to review but hoping it goes full of love. 😍🥰❤️

3 years ago
0
cartel_thompson
cartel_thompson

Early to review, but pls author don't disappoint me. Keep writing for more exciting plot. I keep reading your story, and ur revision. Applauded 👏👏u change the plot but I like it though. 🥰😍🥰

3 years ago
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marie_larsona
marie_larsona

yey! I am excited to read the next chap. 👏👏😍🥰😍😘🥰😍 I gave 5 star especially the updating stability. .I hope this story won't be disappoints me😭😭

3 years ago
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Galleta1998
Galleta1998

😍🥰😘Nice to read this story. Early giving a review. 🥰😍🥰😍😍 Love the flow of the story. .not really like the other story, the start is thrilling and I hope more love on the rest chap

3 years ago
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Hallowed456
Hallowed456

First time to review. I read this book earlier but thanks you revise it author. I much better like ur revision. 👍❤️😍🥰🥰😍 please update more. I am eager to read more about ur story😭😭

3 years ago
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Mareng
Mareng

Loving this story😍🥰😍❤️🧡💛💓💞💕👍👍👍waiting for your updates author. 😍😀😃😍🥰😘🥰😘😍😍❤️🧡❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍👍✊ good job. Keep it up writing. 😘😘

3 years ago
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RogueRogie
RogueRogie

I read this before, and I comments a lots but sad to read again, the author revise it😭😭 but, started reading again and I started to love it. .thanks for the revision. 🥰😍😘😘

3 years ago
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