Star Wars: Blurred Lines

This is a super underrated novel and if it dosen’t get dropped then will probably be my number one Star Wars fanfic out there, plus he’s not some basic human

If you don't like fillers don't read it, I think at least half of the word count is just filled with profanities and curses, the man can't finish the sentence without cursing profanities in every line

Decent premise and ideas, but falls flat with two dimensional characters that have lazy dialog. MC comes across as lazy, wishy washy and entitled. Overall decent but let down by bad writing and uniteresting portrails of the characters.

Havent read the story yet but judging from other books i have seen you comment on I think this is gonna be a real gem. Truthfully i should give this a 4 star but im too lazy and doing this on my phone so i aint gonna do it. Just gonna wait till chapters pile up then read 😁😁

so far so good ..................... ..............................................................................................................................................................................

Not great at writing reviews, so simply put this is the best Star Wars fanfic I've ever read, 5 stars. Here's some reasons why: Funny MC, strong but not OP, he naturally(kinda) has a lot of raw power in the force but is still gradually developing his control and learning force techniques. A couple of time-skips during his childhood and early training means that while his abilities and personal relationships are clear and well-developed you don't have to sit through 30 chapters of a grown man meditating on the force and pretending to be a child. As of chapter 20 or so MC is beginning to encounter events of the canon plot, so don't know if the story will remain as fast-paced, or how OC will affect canon, but looking forward to finding out. Possible love interests introduced but too early to tell, no simping or perving beyond occasionally checking out hot alien women

Scottish person in Star Wars... all i have to say about this is You-Tube Burnistoun - Voice Recognition Lift 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

if it dosen’t get dropped, probably be my number one Star Wars fanfic out there. .................................................................... ....................................................................

I'm a complete newbie the only experience I have with Star Wars was when I played Lego Star Wars a few years back. I still like this fanfic tho I just needed to search a few things up. On CH 14

Nice work keep it up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

This is a great read and has good charchter development with nice story flow. Its a smooth and entertaining read. Thank you for the time you put into it and I look forward to were the main character goes and does in future chapters.

i love this, more more more more more plsssss!!

yes a nonretard savage opress. (my opinion he had no brain or personality) this will make a good story. can't wait to see what you make author.

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