Seven Hearts: The path of darkness
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Our story starts in the holy kingdom, the land of the chosen ones. Where people live in a perfect utopian society that gave them happiness and harmony no other place will provide.
Yet this ideal picture was nothing but nonsensical facades and that this kingdom hid some deep dark secrets.
our protagonist Ray starts his journey after he got sentenced to a cruel death because of a mistake his parents did in the distant past and died without telling him.
Such a treatment changed Ray and his childish mind that should've lived a peaceful life matured into a ruthless revenge seeker that yearns for his goal.
Will he be able to achieve his almost impossible dream? Or will he fall into the abyss forgotten forever?
(Sorry for the edgy synopsis but I hope you will give my story a try. I'm still a beginner so please)
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A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
Ahh this is such a good story, although I think the pace is fast and the chapters are short but hey the story is good. Ofc I like the mystery element and the description for main character (Ray) is alluring, it hooks you right in from the first chapter when he was pushed into the misty pit (and kinda satisfactory how he grabbed one of the guards as he fell hehe, also kill the council of original families in future will ya Ray 😭😭). There's not much to say about characters design as I'm like on 11 chapters and Ray is still discovering his powers. Although the character I liked the most till now would ofc be the grimoire of seven hearts 🤣🤣 that book is hilarious. So yeah that concludes my review for now, might update it in future, the book is a solid 4 for me rn but giving it a 5 coz it's new and personally I think it would be good if done right, which I know it would because I believe in you author 😌😌.
This story is slightly edgy, but he did warn me. Otherwise, everything else is solid, though not really my cup of tea due to BLOOOOODDD. If you like BLOOOODDDDDD to any extent then read this!
Nice story, go to save my Reading List. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Infinite in mystery is the gift of the Goddess We seek it thus, and take to the sky Ripples form on the water's surface The wandering soul knows no rest.
Not the best story out there but I try my best to make it a new experience for all Of you. I did use some cliché concepts in there, but I used them in a new way that you will hopefully like.
Not really a fan of writing reviews..Its just good. read it Just to mention something, the mistakes in grammar should be fixed to make it even more good
Don't mind me, just enjoying the story. no seriously, this is good. keep up the good work author because the story until this point (chapter 42) is quite good.
I don't know how to write reviews but I will briefly talk about this. although it's still rough around the edges and there's some grammatical mistakes, The story makes up for it and the way the author executed it. keep up author-san
Wow....Im actually speechless...This is a hidden gem with every sense of the word. The characters are well built and the world is very interesting. I hope the author keeps on going with this flow.
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