In multiverses with Majin Buu’s ability

people getting mad because the novel is harem wth? dont they read the tags? why even bother to read something you dislike and leave bad reviews and mess up the author rating for no reason

1-Writting is decent. It has mistakes but, as i said, is decent. 3/5 2-Stability is good but not perfect. 4/5 3-The story is forced and stupid. MC joined Luffy without reason. 2/5 4-The MC, as i said, joined Luffy crew without reason, he dont use future knowledge and he is very nerfed. I mean, he asked for Majin Buu powers, and he fought equal with East Blue Luffy... That is stupid. 2/5 5-Background decent. Is the world of OP so... But nothing new, or a new point of view of the world. Just a coppy of canon. 3/5

choose a cool character and made it a harem. no respect ...........................................................................................

Well, chapter 5 where the cringe start is the end point for me. I know you want to have shounen moment, and I do agree it's your own freedom to write how you like it. So I wouldn't say or write anything negative about it apart from saying I don't like it. Others may.. Good luck with your fanfic mate..

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luffy folower,,whats the point making ff if still leech on luffy .

I like the idea behind it, but the quality of the writing is bad. I like the idea of the MC having Majin Buu's ability's, but the fact that there isn't a limit or a way for the MC to unlock them is really terrible. The MC could just straight up go to whitebeard, kaido, big mom, garp or any of the OP characters, turn them into candy then gain there strength. There is also a problem with the actually writing fluidity. The fluidity of the writing along with the grammar mistakes (which i looked passes as the authors first language isn't English) makes for the story to be un-enjoyable and difficult to understand what's happening in the plot. Some advise I have for the author is to either set some limitations on the MC's ability or through the journey make him do challenges that he would have to complete from the ROB to unlock more of his potential powers. I also recommend using a writing tool like read and write gold or Grammarly to help with the fluidity and grammar for the writing.

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Pretty trash novel, I won't lie. Author says "English isn't my first language, but the grammar will be better than MTL" and then proceeds to, in my opinion, write much worse than MTL. -Writing quality is terrible, story development is terrible, it literally just follows OP canon, character design is trash, and world background is terrible.-Honestly not worth reading unless you have absolutely nothing else to read.

Can't even call the MC a beta he's just a complete moron, suppose he's like the author in that regard. ---------------------------------------------

Remind for all new readers! Poor writing, aimless and stupid MC too. The author is too fond of Chinese novels, because some words and sentences are in the story. For example, Conqueror Haki was changed to Royal Haki. OK, that's all my review. Here I want to give some spoilers to new readers, be careful reading this ff. Because the MC has the personality of a child, has matured from his old life, but still acts like a teenager who is still a fanboy. His wish seems useless, meaning that you can read this ff while you are eating or kill your boredom (didn't find a good novel or a good novel update).

Had an good idea going for himself, sadly he ruined it with his terrible grammar .....................................................................

ok... so far this is one of the best fanfic that i read so I hope for more... the story/plot is good the development is also good... I can't wait for him to travel to other world or universe... I wonder if he can absorb the longinus and the infinity stones huehuehuehue.... so PLEASE DON'T EVEN THINK OF DROPPING THIS AND PLEASE MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS...

the writing quality is bad. sudden change of pov, typos here and there made it hard to stay focused on the story. it's just not fun. it has potential and fun to read if author fix it