3 chapters are out at this time
Has potential but the first chapter felt rushed, naruto is kind of all over the place (but that just might be naruto in general) mc is kind of getting everything just handed to him, maybe that will change later but right now it just feels like everyone is on his side while others dont matter?
maybe its just me tho
On the other hand it really made me just want to read more, so keep it up author!
3 years ago
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Cup_Of_Cappuchino
Very good story overall. The character progression of Namaru seems kind of rushed but yet fun and unique. I don't think that you got Sauske nor Sarada's personalities accurately. Sauske acts more "upbeat" you could say, and Sarada is kind of lacking the flair you would see her with. Might just be me though. The first chapter felt kind of rushed but I can understand that. So far this seems like it has some pretty good potential so far. Keep it up!
3 chapters are out at this time Has potential but the first chapter felt rushed, naruto is kind of all over the place (but that just might be naruto in general) mc is kind of getting everything just handed to him, maybe that will change later but right now it just feels like everyone is on his side while others dont matter? maybe its just me tho On the other hand it really made me just want to read more, so keep it up author!
Very good story overall. The character progression of Namaru seems kind of rushed but yet fun and unique. I don't think that you got Sauske nor Sarada's personalities accurately. Sauske acts more "upbeat" you could say, and Sarada is kind of lacking the flair you would see her with. Might just be me though. The first chapter felt kind of rushed but I can understand that. So far this seems like it has some pretty good potential so far. Keep it up!