When a normal human suddenly dies and enters another world with the almighty cheat, their very own system, what do you think would happen?
They will rise above every other being and soar the skies, for they will become an unstoppable force that brushes through the entire world, causing waves... Or so it normally goes, right?
After Victor dies, he did get transmigrated, but it wasn't as a rich young master or some character with unfathomable potential. NO. He woke up as a random dungeon mob in another world...
Read to follow Victor's journey through his new life as a mob.
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"Oh readers! Human I am no more!!"
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
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Although the main character is a zombie, he is too emotional. Such main characters are not interesting and often they always want to return to human life or form, although it would be much more interesting if they were chasing only force
Great book, interesting and very well written. I hope you continue writing it and don't drop it. The story is very unique and I am hooked to see what will happen next. I love the villain mc very much and hope you don't add any romance or harem in the future. That is all I have to say, stay well and keep writing.
Although the idea Is fresh its not new I have seen it only 2 time and the authors of the novels dropped it so I hope you can do better and not drop I also hope you get a bit original in the all the new race names like cursed undead, necrosis undead , blood abomination, and some baddass sounding name( my one sound awful U _ U ) instead of using words like warrior high comander and what not just feels like some mobs In some rpg to collect exp it dosent feels exclusive to the mc and the idea that he can combine two beneficial trait from two eace like the night vision from owls and farsight from eagel wings from doves eco location and from bats and combine them their is a lot of potential but you just focus on zombies who due to constantly being shown as week and pathetic just feels off and its not that zombie are some unique things all undead have the perks for not getting tired hope you rename the novel to something better get past naming the the race of the mc as some weak sounding mob form rpg English is not my native language
Cool premise let down by inconsistent character writing as well as blatant copying of solo levelling characters and traits, decent writing quality let down by trying to be something it’s not.
at first the story had way too much potential to be true, I liked the MC abilities and evolution stuff until it became a copy of solo leveling, hear me out, the author had to give MC an ability to rise zombies with the same activation word as solo leveling, similar characters. For me I would have enjoyed it more if instead of becoming a solo leveling copy it focused on MC and after that he started to meet powerful zombies who decided to follow him instead of a necromancer who summons zombies out of thin air. luv to the author <3
Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.
Above average novel at most. It has "I'm a Spider, So What" vibes, but the development of the story feels slightly bland? It's too straightforward, so it became difficult to maintain interest as I kept reading. It's not a bad book, but it can certainly be improved as the author is a bit lazy in his writing style.
Ok this is just anoying. Too much internal monologues. The experience is useless since we can’t even see what it says just the author telling us “oh it is at 50%”. Fix this Please. It would only take 1min to change it to %. OVERALL THIS CAN BE GREAT BUT THE LITTLE PR ARE PROBLEM ARE BRINGING IT DOWN.
currently at chapter 10. novel looks good. keep up the good work author. . . . . . .
One of the best non-human stories out there. The only thing that did bot sit right with me was the rushed ending but apart from that its definitely above average. I recommend
this is a really nice book loved 😍 reading it.!!
I did not expect to like this read this much!! Bro really worked hard to level up here, and he didn't just get a cheat that basically did everything for him. He really had to struggle up those levels to be stronger than everyone else. Hope to see more
Not gonna lie, started the story because I was just looking for something to read while i waited for stories to update but now I’m hooked, it’s a good read so far and hopefully it continues