Re: Apocalypse He Who Devours Monsters

Like always shameless Author review. But i have a few things i'd like to say. First things first, THIS IS NOT A TRANSLATION! this is a pure work of imagination an original novel. Secondly, this work is gonna be beefy, LIKE REALLY BIG. So it will take several arcs and several twists to fully set up. Thirdly, this is a Slow buildup. So if you're expecting the MC to become omega OP from chapter one, this is not the book for you. I'll be focusing on character development of all the characters in the book, if you don't like a character's behavior then GOOD that means it's working. Lastly, i hope you enjoy this work and stay tuned. I'll make sure to always upload quality content and if you're dissatisfied with anything i'll make sure to either explain why it is that way or change it if it's a convincing argument, I don't shy away from criticism if it's constructive and has a purpose. Thank you all and hope you like it. Now let's Get Killing!

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Author, somehow the name sounds familiar to me... is this name inspire from the novel "He who fights with monsters"...

It's a really good, good work author I'm a fan

Pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.

Hooked from the start to end, waiting for more updates

I really liked it so far it's very good, the story is very good and the development is great, the protagonist's personality I'm very supportive and his interaction with two other characters is Very interesting

Amazing story from an amazing author! Read it and book mark it for future bingeing. — Only downside is low update stability, but this is a secondary novel for the author so I’m not surprised. — Notes: Characters are great, MC is not super smart, he makes mistakes, can’t recall everything of value from the future… Basically, the MC is very human, as humans make mistakes. MC is not a hero or a saint, he’s very realistic with his goals and expectations. Bit of swearing but it’s a normal amount to me, seems realistic for a deadly environment within the USA. — Keep it up Baiko! Hope you can start pumping out chapters more, since you know I can’t get enough of your books!

Positive: 1. Love Rewind/Reincarnation plots, this one has a system plot added which I also like. 2. Chapters are not 3 pages, so I get more and who doesn't love more? 3. MC isn't a pushover or total jerk. He's courageous, smart, team player, and family man. Negative: 1. You don't know where the MC is located in the world, until many chapters in, which is confusing. The world building is practically non-existent. All you know is that humanity is being invaded, it adds mystery sure. But the intro to a plot needs to be captivating, not generic and vague. Coming into a genre that is heavily competitive, this intro had very little NEW. 2. The intro had too many plot holes, I want to ask this: If you watched the world destroyed and had the chance to go back in time to save your loved ones...would you use the little time you had to go to college? delegate preparations with little hands on? tell your friend and a technical stranger before your 'beloved parents,' what's going on? sleep?(that last one is based on realistic PTSD, anyone who has seen real death much less millions die in front of them would not sleep well) 3. The swearing is too much. Every other word out of anyone's mouth is the F word. As a reader, I see swear words as filler words such as 'like,' 'um,' 'uh.' Your word count is amazing, but I feel cheated. Again, this is a readers viewpoint. Most people who swear this much in a novel, are writing how they speak. But it really detracts from the plot. Granted some situations could realistically need a swear word, just not that much.

For reference I read what was free. The writing quality is good with very few errors present. Sometimes the wrong word is used or other minor grammatical errors. Update stability is not the greatest but it’s a new story. Character and story design is unique with some cliches scattered in it so far. Wish the free chapters would have explored the system and how the characters will develop some so you know what your getting invested in before hand though. Good luck author with your story