the monarch

Hello, this is my first comment on my novel, I'm going to redo the first 3 chapters, they are in a much lower quality, please don't give up before them

This book successfully bridges the gap between entertainment and profundity. It is a gripping narrative filled with multidimensional characters that the reader cannot help but root for. The plot unravels with surprising twists and heartwarming moments that keep the reader engrossed till the very end. The author's command over language enhances the storytelling, creating vivid imagery and stirring emotions. The characters' evolution feels authentic, reflecting the complexities of real-life relationships. Moreover, the book explores meaningful themes with subtlety and depth, making the reader pause and reflect. It's a seamless blend of impactful storytelling and intellectual stimulation, undoubtedly meriting a 5-star rating.

First of all, you can write your author's notes at the end of the chapter or there's a section for it since I expected to get into the story once I opened the chapter. Secondly, there were few of grammars mistakes which I pointed out in the comments section so I hope that could help. I suggest you to proofread again since there were some confusion, imo.

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The book brims with immense potential, captivating the reader with its well-executed time skips that are both coherent and comprehensible. Nonetheless, I recommend keeping an eye out for a few minor grammatical errors that can be easily rectified. Your talent as an author shines through, and I encourage you to persist in your excellent work!

Your novel is ok. I think for a 19-20 yr to write his first novel and be better than most others out there is very good. But truthfully I felt the novel still has many flaws in logic and what you wanted to deliver was not presented as such. I have even written some flaws in logic that I saw in your novel and ignored many others as I was lazy to write more comments. But I hope this helps you better yourself.

Nice book with nice chapters please keep it up because the book is 😃

I’ve just started this book but so far it has a strong beginning. The pace is good and apart from a few minor grammatical errors the writing quality is also solid. Will await more chapters!

found this novel loving it.it has villian mc who will do everything for gain power yeah

took a while but finally got to the storyline an gotta say loving it so far has most of my favourite elements , katanas an a austerem mc, author dont you dare drop this i can't support you with golden tickets currently but you can get my stones.keep it up

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I feel the first and second chapters are written very differently from the otheers I also feel you might wantt to improve the world setting Overall I love your storyline and I kno wit's going to be a really great book at the end of the day.......Keep on writing!!!!

Typos writer always seem to mistake kayden as she a lot and not him or he

Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?