My Blood Legacy: Reincarnated as a Vampire

Hello Hello! This is your greedy author! I hope you can enjoy this story! There are many points that can be improved and believe me, I know that! But any constructive criticism, comments and questions, I will always be here to answer your questions! Also, enjoy this work! I make them with great care and I hope you love them as much as I do! Thanks for reading! There is a moment in the novel where there is a punishment for our MC so that he stays in a female body for a few chapters, they can be skipped if you don't want to read, please don't come and hate me, please be a normal person . This is not a Yuri, it is not "Gay" as they say. Just don't read it if you don't like it, please...

the author deserves a Grammy... take that from me . Ms Author-chan... you have my lower brothers love. For a lady to write a male oriented book capable of captivating male audience amazes me... Much love♥

pro; a decent book drawing from many other books painting a simple to understand power structure that makes it easy to digest and interesting enough to draw you in. irrelevant power ups are skipped, and fight scenes are engaging yet succinct enough not to be annoying. cons; mental health issues being prolonged and exaggerated in a rather irritating manner. 13 years and 60 chapters later, a grown man in a child's body still doesn't understand his own self. fiction is a gateway away from the mundane and self evident failures of real life, who wants to escape real life to deal with a man-child. 5/10 for me, easily consumable but nasty plot issues.

The story is great, that's all... But why? Because the author writes it with love, not only to milk money but really cares to deliver something that the readers like, an epic adventure with Dante being an excellent MC, smart, hardworking, kind to his lovers but ruthless to his enemies. The main female leads have different personalities and are very pleasant. I'm not going to say that everything is perfect, but the author is learning from each mistake and taking readers' feedback, so give it a try, you might be surprised at how enjoyable this story can be.

This is such a great novel, I’m happy that I found it relatively early. The world building and characters are what makes this fun. You’ll see familiar names from novels, biblical lore, and mythologies. Now don’t worry, there may be some similarities but the authors taken their own unique spin on things. Few things make me happier than a novel that has a stupid OP mom that’ll do practically anything for their kid, so even excluding my bias I would still recommend everyone try this out. (One thing to note is that the author has stated English isn’t their first language, but don’t be scared! The grammar is really good, and doesn’t mess with the immersion.)

story was absolutely great, enjoyable had twosts and ups and downs, low points and high points, was ruined at chapter 100, when the mc dies, his women basically abandoned for 10 years due to it and then is reincarnated in A WOMANS BODY. maybe mention genderbend in the tags in the synopsis or something, waste of 1000 coins/ 20 bucks. Other than that it was well written, with just a few grammar issues and 2 nontranslated paragraphs.

I was going to read it till I saw the 'punishment' part, I can see where this got inspired from, but this unfortunately isn't my cup of tea.

Hi Author! There are too many married women in harem? I don’t like that kind of woman. They’re not deserved for Mc’s holy rod. And there were too much other men’s stains and clues in their holes and on their bodies. However their secret cave have used to full with other man’s liquids. after Mc pierce them and then he use his rod with other harem’s members that can make other woman dirty with other men’s stains and clues too.

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I simply loved the work, the construction of characters, the construction of the world, I'm happy that the author didn't follow the path of the protagonist having all the powers of the world, thus having a new female body (the idea of ​​starting over to create a solid base and good, but the female body is frustrating). Author by the caps I could tell that you read that other famous vampire novel there, I sincerely hope it doesn't take the same direction.

I love this book so far pace is great, the investment of each character is amazing

Ill start off by saying that im not terribly far in the story thus far. The premise, world, and characters have alot of potential in my opinion. I like alot of the dialogue so far, and it seems to be heading in a good direction. Unfortunately, I feel like the pacing is not great. Character relationships develop abnormally quickly, certain, seemingly, major character developments and reveals sort of just happen. Plot points come at you really quickly. I imiagine the author is eager to get into the meat of the story and has plans for where to go, which I like very much. However, I feel as though it comes at the expense of meaningful character development. The beginning exposition is extremely important. I think its worth giving a read to see if its your cup of tea, and I think its entirely possible some of these issues can be straightened out as the story continues. I will say I have been enjoying it, putting aside the aforementioned issues.

an easy 4.2 out of 5 for me, this review is only based on the first 60+ chapters. The writing quality is good, only problem for me would be inconsistent length of the chapters that effect the price for the chapters like some are 20+ and some are 9 to 10. The story is very interesting even though I have read a fair share of vampire stories this one is still unique in its own way, even though there are reference from famous works but that's make it better for me so i really like the humour and the plot of the story. Some characters are not flushed out and are there just to get face slapped by mc, or either to develop the plot more, not all but some. The world has not been explored but from the auxiliary chapter about the World building it looks promising.

Chapters felt Short but Works Character designs are Weak People Don't feel Alive needs work Writing Style is Good but Can Improve a lot in-depth and minor details are completely missing