Divine Luck
Daniel lost his parents in a car accident at the age of 7. He wants to make a living off the recently launched VR game known as ‘Divine Path’. The game recreates all five human senses, which immerses the players into an expansive world with several class options to choose from. With this innovation, the game went viral within no time.
Daniel, being a committed player, collects valuable items and sells them to other players for real world money. but his below average life took a turn when he unexpectedly met someone.
"Chance is low? Hah! That doesn't work on me!" With a smug face, Danie looked at the blue holographic panel before him.
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(Author: guys, this is my newest novel, if you wana support me, please add the book to your library, ty!!)
Shameless author here, I am rating this 5 stars cuz this is my work and i can't rate it any less. all I wanna say is, if you find any errors, want me to fix something or wanna suggest something, do leave comments on the chapters and paragraphs. Grammar will improve with time, don't worry about it.
alright, I am indeed shameless. writing this review after chap 58! I won't be spoiling anything, so you don't need to worry about spoilers. so, here are some points you have to know whole reading this story: 1. First of all, I am new to this genre. Some might say that I've already written a book in this genre, but if you inspect it closely, you'll see that it's only 50 chapters long. 2. I don't mind criticism. 3. This is not a harem novel, so rest assured. 4. I don't plan on updating extra chapters for power stone milestones, but I might think about it in the future. 5. The updates may get unstable at times, but I'll try my best to keep updating daily. 6. If you find any errors, you can join my discord server and tell me about it :D Ty for reading, Happy reading!
Ok got as far as chapter 23 before giving up. 0 world building, 0 character development, Writing quality is mid. Spoiler: so far guy heals an injured fox that ends up being a fragment of goddess of luck who rando shows up gives guy high luck stat, and a pet fox has all kinds of unexplained abilities, we can infer the mc is a knight maybe a stealth type who knows as author doesn't really build the character and goes all over the place with the character and the pet with little to no explanations or even basic stats or development of the game character or the out of game character. MC sells unknown loot of epic quality and makes lump sums of money. I think the author needs to actually try playing an MMO or read more of the genre before writing a book in the category.
Keep up the good work I love how Daniel was charmed for the cute foxy not to hurt and it was the goddess of luck fragment. :) Love the story plot so much
Imma stalk you and your story, keep an eye out for yourself.........................................................................................
Ok I like the story a lot. I’ll try not to spoil it but at the same time say something useful. First of all thee story type is overpowered mc but with a focus on cuteness. So even though it leans towards adventure it more directly fills a slice of life storyline. To answer the previous poster who said there’s no story development, I will say that the story seems very focused on the mc and his pet ( or is it the fox and her pet human?) there was some side chars that got some development but then disappeared . However it’s still a new story and I haven’t passed 30 chapters yet so maybe they will be back. To the author, part of world building includes side chars and they should interact to expand the story world. I will have to see if some of these side chars start interacting more with the story and sticking around. And the area with the side chars needs a bit of building. The mc will be visiting town a lot, if you are really doing slice of life we need to see that life, if you are doing adventure then a bit more excitement in the adventure side ( means the mc has to be challenged even though he’s op.). So my rating, good so far, needs a bit more worldbuilding ( expand the scope) without losing the cuteness that I like.
I dunno why but I really relate to that Nico Character, what a good fellow. keep up the great work!