Marvel's Harem for Harry

Reader Review)

Until chapter 4 everything was pretty average. In chapter 4, the author ruined everything completely! (Tag Yuri!)

Friendly Review)))) It's good, although for me the harem/gathering of girls isn't really to my liking.

you have lots and lost of mistakes in your story for whatever reason and you are not even editing those, I don't know why you are doing this you could make late everything else because at least you should be able to learn that from that b**** hela manipulate others to do your biding but you didn't think about that and you are making everything hate him I don't know for what reason its like you hate everything about that story you could have manipulated them but you choose to not do that are you didn't think about that I am in she is the king of her realm and she has the quality of being a king so at least she should have taught him something similar to male nucleate others to do their work for him and don't forget that he has connection with death herself so she should be able to sense deathly hallows herself

It’s not bad but the grammer and wording needs a huge revamp cause it kinda sucks . I do like the plot tho so good job on that:)

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Havent read yet, i just want to clarify something first.. is this a marvel world or hp world? or maybe both? i havent started reading cuz i dont like reading novels with few chapters, so here's a free 5 star 🤣

tiene potencial todo queda en el desarrollo de la historia y que el escritor la continúe y no la deje de lado como ya a pasado con proyectos de este mismo estilo de otros escritores

too much information like it's like wiki for marvel girls