Reborn in Danmachi as a Dragon-Kin (Rewrite)

For those who don't like tragedy stories, I recommend that you don't read this here, avoid it at all costs, the author simply killed half of everyone he knew, And I don't doubt he kills the rest later too, because this is the type of writer who only knows how to develop a character by killing everyone around him. He killed his father, mother, grandparents and teachers, I have no doubt about killing his brothers in the future, for more character "development", simply pathetic, After all, it's the only way to develop character that he knows, to kill everyone involved with the protagonist

The story seems to rely on gratuitous shocks and unnecessary violence. This is not only problematic but also detracts from what could have been a more engaging narrative. Thirty chapters were spent on character development, but in the end, it all seemed pointless. There are countless ways to build characters effectively and develop plots that truly matter. Unfortunately, all the time and effort put into reading this content were not rewarded, as many characters introduced did not have any significant importance to the story. It's frustrating to have spent hours trying to memorize character names that, in the end, contributed nothing to the outcome. I hope that future narratives learn from these mistakes and focus on providing readers with a more rewarding and meaningful experience.

I like it so far I just hope u don’t kill any of his childhood friends or siblings this time. Sure make them loose a arm or a leg but don’t kill them bc then all that character development goes and it’s just sad to see good characters go so early in the grand scheme of things. You know

This rewrite is really cool, I've always really liked MC, non-humans, especially dragons, the original didn't really hook me, but this one is making me even more excited to see it and keep up with the releases xD

Romance+R18+Harem+Danmatchi= Awesome..... usually, but not this time. "THE MC IS 12 YEARS OLD FFS!!!!!" as of chapter 90. In my opinion, three of the tags are LIES to get people to read because I don't see the author getting the mc to 18 by chapter 400, which will more than likely be dropped by then seems like a big CON to me.

HungryMushroom Amazing fanfic Keep doing an amazing job You can do this Danmachi Fanfic idea directly after you finish Reborn in Danmachi as a Dragon-Kin (Rewrite) Shadow Monarch in Danmachi A soul is reborn into Danmachi with the powers of the Shadow Monarch. What will he do now? Harem Hestia Ais Wallenstein Riveria Ljos Alf Ryuu Lion Tione Hiryute Tiona Hiryute Freya Hephaestus Demeter Aisha Belka Phryne Jamil Lena Tally Samira Sanjouno Haruhime Ishtar Bache Kalif Argana Kalif Tsubaki Collbrande Laura Shakti Varma Sophia Flores Emma Flores

Authors usual 5 star review, enjoy the series.

La honra es buena el inicio el desarrollo de personaje pego fuerte pero el autor prometió no Aser una locura así más así que en el confío la verdad una ves llegan a Orario la cosa se pone mejor desde los sucesos trágicos no se preocupen es una joya esta obra una lastima que pocos la miran eso si está es una obra lenta y coherente no se les ocurra pensar que es una obra de H cualquiera de Damanchi típica

author i will really appreciate it if you can answer me who the mc harem members

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I really like this novel, the only thing I hope is that it doesn't drag on too much with childhood, it is also updated more constantly and something I would like would be for the fights to be as epic as in the original danmachi.

Tu protagonista, tu peor error de esta historia y causa de esta calificación...., por ser plano, en todos lo sentidos de la historia, su presencia, pensamientos, desarrollo, perspectiva, intereses y lo peor de todo, sin sentido, por lo tanto, aburrido de leer. Tu deberías saber la importancia de mantener al protagonista como uno de los focos más importantes de cualquier historia y para llevar la narrativa de un personaje dragonico y todo lo que conlleva, que era lo que hacía interesante la idea bajo la cual se hizo está historia, parece más el de un isekai zzzzz npc de segundo plano, con tragedia cliché y todo, incluso sus conexiones más importantes y que le darían peso a su tragedia se sienten planas, sin conexion emocional profunda alguna, su interaccion con su familia, tiene la misma calidad de escritura que las de un manual de instrucciones de shampoo, mucho texto que solo logra aburrir a la gente, plano y aburrido, incluso el lector tiene que hacer la mayor cantidad de esfuerzo imaginativo para continuar convenciendose de leer tu aburrida historia. Lo único que podría haber sido bueno de tu historia, es el trasfondo mundial y el desarrollo de otros personajes, que son más interesantes que tú propio protagonistas. Tu escritura en general, realmente no es mala, lograste hacer un buen trasfondo mundial, así como mejóraste en el desarrollo y interacciones de otros personajes fuera del foco del protagonista, lo que hace tu protagonista en comparación sea realmente el único gran defecto de tu historia, simplemente no se manejo bien y siendo sincero, a menos que rehagas la historia no creo que tengas forma de arreglarlo.

Small warning for those looking for fast pace action filled story, this one has a lot of slice of life and character developement i read to hapter 80 but at this rate i dont think they would even have a level 3 by chapter 200 and it might still be in the dark age after zeus and hero family fell.

Muito bom, mas tem espaço para melhoras. ...... ...... ....... ....... ..... ....... ...... ...... ....... ....... ....... ........ ...... ...... ...... ......