"I think this will work: Your inventions no longer rely on intelligence, but on love and courage."
Trailblazer: "The simulated universe has been updated again. How did you do it?"
Gu Tang: "I accidentally dropped a pizza into it."
March 7th: "I heard this item can knock out enemies. How do you use it?"
Gu Tang: "Hold it, and then hit the enemy's face until they pass out."
Welt: "This handgun... why can it shoot more bullets than it holds?"
Gu Tang: "Maybe the handgun forgot it ran out of ammo. Don't worry, just reload it later."
Herta: "I heard you also successfully met the Aeon of Erudition?"
Gu Tang: "Yes, the Aeon of Erudition said I am insulated from intelligence and couldn't appoint me as a messenger."
There's not much progression at the time of this review, but it's great fun. Seriously, it's hilarious. The main character is an idiot savant, taken to the extremes of both words. Each of his inventions is basically like a high-grade curio, having incredible effects, but often come with odd or dangerous side effects, like a ring that has a 50/50 chance of making a stable hole in something or exploing. He is also hilariously overpowered, but doesn't actually fight that much or show his strength, relying instead on inventions that even if they fail or malfunction, they still do their job somehow. A large part of what makes this funny is also interactions and Gu Tang's lines, though multiple characters are rather... off. Asta is a tsundere, Herta is a pervert, and Dan Heng is actually from a full-on parody world. Alternatively, he went insane, what else would explain his thoughts as they are now? For example, they followed (loosely) the plot, got to Belobog, Dan Heng noticed multiple females wear black stockings -> surely they must've developed warming techonology in such form.
This is the best crack fic of Honkai Star rail you will read. This fic is very hilarious and I hope you don't try and read this seriously. I loved every second of it. Everyone's interactions is perfectly written as well. I believe there was a massive error of Himeko's name with Jing Yuan in chapter 6 or 7 but the translator corrected the mistake and posted a complete re-upload in the next chapter so do have some patience and fun.
MC has the powers of Warhammer orcs and wields the WAAAAGH! with great control
the translation can use some work but it is a lot of fun to read warning the main character is extremely stupid but it results into a lot of funny situations
Only on chapter three and it’s already peak fiction.
Hello! I love this. i am on chapter 9 and i am already loved this. question is there an original link of this fanfic or you made it. if do. its really good!
Love my honkai star rail stories. It's also really funny.
This story is wack,but it is also funny in the most wrong ways
So don't expect the characters to be like their in game personality. This is pure Crack and not meant to be taken seriously so if you're looking for a more serious story this is not it. Also it's mtl. Other than these things it's just so funny also anyone know the Chinese title of this or even where the raws are?
I am in whatever ya cooking I am all in my man keep cooking uo
if you can ignore all the wrong names, this is a hilarious star rail fict. grammatical error here and there, but it isn't unreadable. give this a read, you won't regret it.
The only thing that needs work is the translation. It updates frequently and is sorta funny. Don't expect anything to serious though it's sorta best if you just turn off your brain.
It's alright nothing crazy, he also doesn't translate it well enough, but it's decent.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
very good
Great story, but character names are poorly translated, which influences the immersion. Especially in a fanfiction.