In the Star Rail, relying on 3 points of intelligence to shock Herta

In the Star Rail, relying on 3 points of intelligence to shock Herta

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Author: Cham_Zin
4.56
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"I think this will work: Your inventions no longer rely on intelligence, but on love and courage."



Trailblazer: "The simulated universe has been updated again. How did you do it?"

Gu Tang: "I accidentally dropped a pizza into it."



March 7th: "I heard this item can knock out enemies. How do you use it?"

Gu Tang: "Hold it, and then hit the enemy's face until they pass out."



Welt: "This handgun... why can it shoot more bullets than it holds?"

Gu Tang: "Maybe the handgun forgot it ran out of ammo. Don't worry, just reload it later."



Herta: "I heard you also successfully met the Aeon of Erudition?"

Gu Tang: "Yes, the Aeon of Erudition said I am insulated from intelligence and couldn't appoint me as a messenger."

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PhectMaphter
PhectMaphter

There's not much progression at the time of this review, but it's great fun. Seriously, it's hilarious. The main character is an idiot savant, taken to the extremes of both words. Each of his inventions is basically like a high-grade curio, having incredible effects, but often come with odd or dangerous side effects, like a ring that has a 50/50 chance of making a stable hole in something or exploing. He is also hilariously overpowered, but doesn't actually fight that much or show his strength, relying instead on inventions that even if they fail or malfunction, they still do their job somehow. A large part of what makes this funny is also interactions and Gu Tang's lines, though multiple characters are rather... off. Asta is a tsundere, Herta is a pervert, and Dan Heng is actually from a full-on parody world. Alternatively, he went insane, what else would explain his thoughts as they are now? For example, they followed (loosely) the plot, got to Belobog, Dan Heng noticed multiple females wear black stockings -> surely they must've developed warming techonology in such form.

2 months ago
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Efthee
Efthee

This is the best crack fic of Honkai Star rail you will read. This fic is very hilarious and I hope you don't try and read this seriously. I loved every second of it. Everyone's interactions is perfectly written as well. I believe there was a massive error of Himeko's name with Jing Yuan in chapter 6 or 7 but the translator corrected the mistake and posted a complete re-upload in the next chapter so do have some patience and fun.

2 months ago
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shadowstriker102
shadowstriker102

MC has the powers of Warhammer orcs and wields the WAAAAGH! with great control

2 months ago
17
Tommieb
Tommieb

the translation can use some work but it is a lot of fun to read warning the main character is extremely stupid but it results into a lot of funny situations

2 months ago
12
Booing_Booing
Booing_Booing

Only on chapter three and it’s already peak fiction.

2 months ago
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NightmareV3
NightmareV3

Hello! I love this. i am on chapter 9 and i am already loved this. question is there an original link of this fanfic or you made it. if do. its really good!

2 months ago
4
U_gotta_sensu_bean
U_gotta_sensu_bean

Love my honkai star rail stories. It's also really funny.

2 months ago
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Marilinn
Marilinn

This story is wack,but it is also funny in the most wrong ways

2 months ago
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Touya_Satou
Touya_Satou

So don't expect the characters to be like their in game personality. This is pure Crack and not meant to be taken seriously so if you're looking for a more serious story this is not it. Also it's mtl. Other than these things it's just so funny also anyone know the Chinese title of this or even where the raws are?

2 months ago
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SilentGhost19
SilentGhost19

I am in whatever ya cooking I am all in my man keep cooking uo

a month ago
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Kreuz8
Kreuz8

if you can ignore all the wrong names, this is a hilarious star rail fict. grammatical error here and there, but it isn't unreadable. give this a read, you won't regret it.

2 months ago
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labrat1
labrat1

The only thing that needs work is the translation. It updates frequently and is sorta funny. Don't expect anything to serious though it's sorta best if you just turn off your brain.

2 months ago
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Nischal_1116
Nischal_1116

It's alright nothing crazy, he also doesn't translate it well enough, but it's decent.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

2 months ago
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Tokinada
Tokinada

very good

2 months ago
1
kingor
kingor

Great story, but character names are poorly translated, which influences the immersion. Especially in a fanfiction.

2 months ago
1