Naruto: The Mist Within

Naruto: The Mist Within

Fantasy157 Chapters1.0M Views
Author: ItoKun
4.69
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When a Medical student awakens in an infant's body in the deadly Hidden Mist Village, he knows surviving will require more than just his memories of a past life. In a world where children are forced to kill each other and bloodline abilities mark their wielders for death, Ren must carefully balance hiding his true potential while gathering enough strength to change the village's dark future. As Kirigakure descends into an era of unprecedented brutality, this reincarnated soul will discover that the deadliest technique isn't found in forbidden scrolls - it's knowing exactly when to reveal your true power.



Fair Warning:



This is a slow-burn story - no overpowered MC from the start

Power progression is realistic and earned through years of dedicated training

Contains graphic violence and death

Story builds gradually with careful character and plot development



What to Expect:



Detailed training arcs and power progression

Clever manipulation of future events using foreknowledge

Original story arcs and character development





[This novel is for readers who enjoy:

Smart protagonists who rely on wit over raw power

Realistic skill progression and strategic combat

Deep world-building and political intrigue

A fresh perspective on the Naruto universe]

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4son_Re
4son_Re

Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy...... C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden

a month ago
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Matheus_Santos_9759
Matheus_Santos_9759

An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.

a month ago
3
Avirup_Das
Avirup_Das

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3 months ago
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KENZ_OO_YT
KENZ_OO_YT

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4 months ago
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ricardo_yammouni
ricardo_yammouni

W fucking fic, i like the pacing and th character development, even though yu somtimes get the grammer wrong, its only basic, it doesent affect the reading experience alot.

4 months ago
2
blue_man_3510
blue_man_3510

Reveal Spoiler

2 days ago
1
blue_man_3510
blue_man_3510

I would of gave this a 5 star but there are some problems like for example the misgendering of characters he/her also him/his when you mentioning a girl and characters description, like when you introduced a character it would be nice to describe how they look example hair color and so on and the mentioning of jutsu like“henge no jutsu” add a little description next to it (transformation jutsu) and for the same thing for the villages konohagure add (hidden leaf) that would be nice if you can fix these issues I read up to 24 chapters so idk if you fixed these issues in the later chapters but it should be nice to fix these issues in the older chapters too

3 days ago
1
Sami_Alfoheday
Sami_Alfoheday

love the story so far a little slow, but that is OK only problem is the jetsu names in Japanese. make them in English so I know witch jetsu is it

a month ago
1
Vestrix94
Vestrix94

Very interesting, great desition to not place the MC in the Konoha.

a month ago
1
ricardo_yammouni
ricardo_yammouni

yeaaaaaaa!!!!!!! .................................................................................................................,,,,,,,,,

a month ago
1
Baldsan
Baldsan

please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential

2 months ago
1
mantaege
mantaege

it has for sure potential but lets see in the future

3 months ago
1
Victor_7740
Victor_7740

Why not nove this to fanfiction? Also good fic.

3 months ago
1
Jayroy_63
Jayroy_63

This is a good fic in the hidden mist. The Mc is a few years younger than Kakashi. Smart Mc who's not edgy and cares about people. Give it a try

4 months ago
1
IsackFeild
IsackFeild

Really good, I liked the beginning. Can't wait for more chapters! . . .

4 months ago
1