Naruto: The Mist Within
When a Medical student awakens in an infant's body in the deadly Hidden Mist Village, he knows surviving will require more than just his memories of a past life. In a world where children are forced to kill each other and bloodline abilities mark their wielders for death, Ren must carefully balance hiding his true potential while gathering enough strength to change the village's dark future. As Kirigakure descends into an era of unprecedented brutality, this reincarnated soul will discover that the deadliest technique isn't found in forbidden scrolls - it's knowing exactly when to reveal your true power.
Fair Warning:
This is a slow-burn story - no overpowered MC from the start
Power progression is realistic and earned through years of dedicated training
Contains graphic violence and death
Story builds gradually with careful character and plot development
What to Expect:
Detailed training arcs and power progression
Clever manipulation of future events using foreknowledge
Original story arcs and character development
[This novel is for readers who enjoy:
Smart protagonists who rely on wit over raw power
Realistic skill progression and strategic combat
Deep world-building and political intrigue
A fresh perspective on the Naruto universe]
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Well written but has 1 major demerit. 122 chapters in and he's still in the academy...... C'mon. at this rate its looking like i'm closer to retirement than he is to shippuden
An incredible Naruto fanfic set in Kirigakure! The slow-burn character development and immersive world-building are masterfully done. A must-read without a doubt.
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W fucking fic, i like the pacing and th character development, even though yu somtimes get the grammer wrong, its only basic, it doesent affect the reading experience alot.
I read the story in one go. Excellent work. Will eagerly wait for the sequel
A very different approach from most Naruto fanfics, instead of following the standard and more comfortable path with the Konoha setting, the author was more innovative and decided on Kirigakure. And so far I say it's one of the best fanfics of the genre I've read, Unlike most, the choice for slow progression is very well used to introduce us to the world and focus on the characters so that we can care about them. Because of this point, every event that involves them is truly significant to us. So I highly recommend this story if you want to read about a living world where the characters don't revolve around the protagonist, where events have weight and leave you with an eagerness for what the future has in store for our little Ren, start reading now!
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I would of gave this a 5 star but there are some problems like for example the misgendering of characters he/her also him/his when you mentioning a girl and characters description, like when you introduced a character it would be nice to describe how they look example hair color and so on and the mentioning of jutsu like“henge no jutsu” add a little description next to it (transformation jutsu) and for the same thing for the villages konohagure add (hidden leaf) that would be nice if you can fix these issues I read up to 24 chapters so idk if you fixed these issues in the later chapters but it should be nice to fix these issues in the older chapters too
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love the story so far a little slow, but that is OK only problem is the jetsu names in Japanese. make them in English so I know witch jetsu is it
Very interesting, great desition to not place the MC in the Konoha.
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please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential
it has for sure potential but lets see in the future