Though born of the same mother and father
Oona felt herself to be the superior being and Zosia her younger sister by over a decade was insignificant, an ant to be used at her disposal and will
Zosia was raised to be a weapon to be harnessed by Oona yet Oona feels threatened by zosia’s strength which caused tension between sisters
emotions collide and Oona is to choose between power and her familial bonds.
except.~
“wife” Riezekel calls softly, his tender eyes fixed on Zosia with overflowing warmth, the mangled bodies that laid beneath her feet didn’t waver him
instead he pulled her bloodied form into his embrace, capturing her lips into an intense kiss “Husband” a soft moan escaped her lips as her eyes drank the visage of his handsome face, the lingering want in her eyes as clear as day
“leave all the dirty works to me wife, the blade is heavy, your hands are fragile” he scolded yet his voice was filled with overflowing warmth and tenderness as he scooped her into his arms
The novel is good and enjoyable, and the characters are good and built in a tight and clear way without any additional complications. So, it can be said that the novel is very good and worth your time Keep writing and moving forward
The complex relationship between the sisters and Zosia's journey of self-discovery are great with some adjustments in pacing and character development, this novel has the potential to be a standout... fans of powerful female protagonists... its very highly engaging.
it's good novel so far, just need to work on book cover
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