Douluo: Divine Dragon Pattern Staff

from what ive read so far this is pretty good however i wish if the MC would have been more talented but its nice that we can see the MC helping the shrek academy by improving their strengths

5/5 * mc is smart the other characters is not npc type update is 5 chaps a day so yeah author is awesome story development is stable writing quality is top notch

I like everything so far. Can I ask if this is your fanfiction or is it Chinese? 🤔🤔🤔...............................................................

I want to begin with saying that this is a decent overall story. Translation is very good. You can clearly see that this isn't one of those uploads where "author" copy-paste Chinese fanfic into the translation app\website and doesn't care about anything else. If you like this Fandom I would recommend giving it a try... IF! (and there's is a big "IF" here). Give it a try if you can stomach what happens in chapters 23-25. I will give you a minor spoiler by saying that MC gets unjustly, publicly TRASHED, abducted, MANHANDLED again, threatened with tortures and death... all the above he takes while still bending over and offering his help. You know how Chinese main characters are ridiculously prideful? This one is one the opposite side of the spectrum. He sees nothing wrong with the whole situation. I gave up reading in the middle of that scene just because if that is how MC gonna act in the future it will just keep annoying me. But again, if you're OK with being this "humble", you should give this story a go.

All round good fanfic. So far the MC sounds like your average Dude trying to keep on doing the morally right thing that does not go against his ow morals. He is a genius of hard work that treats others like he would want to be treated. The translations are good but I would like to know where you get the Raws.

The first 60 chapters were very good, likeable mc and the translation was good but after that the mc suddenly changed he became ruthless, annoying, hypocritical. Him becoming ruthless is understandable bc he came out of the Slaughter city but he's like a completely different person. Also there's some inconsistencies like the Ice and Fire Alchemy Body being immune to fire, ice and poison while in this fanfic its only immune to poison and resistence to fire and ice. Oscar and Ma hongjun levels being to low and the most ridiculous is that 95% of the spirit beasts drop soul bones to mc and his group. Like everyone in the mc's group has 3-4 soul bones.

Self-review :) Thank you to everyone who has supported this story by reading, leaving comments or reviewing! Much appreciated! If you like this story, please leave a review if you can so that we can get more exposure. Or don't. Regardless, cheers!

read it all recommend for fans of doulou the mc is laid back and enjoyable to read about :D . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .

binged and enjoyed . thanks for the translation