DC Death note

As of now there are only 7 chapters that put any dc fanfic i ever seen in the dust. Not only it explored a forgothen part of gotham created a new world inside Gotham and we really see how it all works out, even trought theres not much detail we can imagine that the place is alive. .i hope it gets more chapters.

I enjoy reading this SOOO very much. I have not seen much grammatical errors worth mentioning. I suggest everyone to read. A good Batman fiction like this is very hard to come by and when you add in the death note and shinigami factors all I can see is perfection.

I dunno, I started to really like this fanfic only for it to suddenly become an arrogant vampire and forget everything about being an awesome and cool shinigami. Eh it kinda puts me off with the mc and her underlings being the vampires and such especially the stuff with her sister

Author i don't know what to say? Just you ruined the story here: 1. u have dropped it, as no update for 10 fuckin days 2. u give her sister strong strength ----------Think here! MC have shinigami+vampire Power her sister have vampire power only But still mc feels that her sister can compete with him. means mc cheat of shinigami just go to gutter, right! This was your biggest mistake! Don't know whether you made a mistake or write something else while u were thinking something else! That's your problem, but the fact that mc vampire+shinigami powers combined are weaker even for a second compared to a person who have taken power from me and still uncontrollable factor! What the ****! man do u think female lead, our mc, got a little too overpowered so just pull her leg down to gutter or something! ===========well who cares,,just i am angryyyyyyy for now! Well **** u! ruined my mood! i am dropiing it! chp. 1 to 9 10/10 chp. 10 [ for me after reading it, i dropped! doesn't matter whether you continue writing after some time or not! ] I m out of this ****!

The death note is something no mortal should get their hands on. I mean having the ability to kill any and all beings just by writing their name and imagining or seeing their face is insanely frightening. Example: you can kill doomsday with ease, and that’s saying something. Especially when doomsday can regenerate no matter how damage he is and then evolve to perfectly counter his foes. Doomsday is a bullshît dc character

Finally a death note fanfic and keep up the good work author you'll need it and I wish you'll keep updating this fanfic, it has potential and it was not your regular mainstream crap that i keep seeing

I like the novel and the character OK too. But she knows that Batman and the Justice league will find out what she did and what she is too in the future .

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Update PleAsE !!!!! I love the idea cause death notes my fav and there aRnt to many dc fics.😍Update Update Update Update Update Update Update!!!!

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Pretty Good :) Need More Updates Please Thanks

Really liking this story, I haven't seen any death note fics with the DC as the starting point and it's even better since she's not normal. I'll be using my stones for this everyday.

Good : )