Hero? In this quirk filled world what is a hero? With so many people desecrating the title who knows? But what I do know is that there are people out there who don't deserve to use it. So to all you fakes, get ready, because I AM HERE.
I only read the first chp: MC has one of the most ****ed up backstories ever....damn its dark..
suggestion:
-After what MC has gone through you cant make him wishy washy or naive..only cold as best and mental at worst.
-OP MC..lone hero...again because of his past
-Add romance but try not make it angst/tragic and dark...Pro MC need a bit of sunlight.
-Make MC hate bakugo..bash bakugo [i dont like bakugo]
---HAS POTENTIAL..GOOD LUCK
5 years ago
69
asaade9999
just another redemption trash thing, earlier chapter had a sad story and how he's able to join the dark star organization the premise is good but here comes why its trash even with 5 years of training as an assasin he's still an emotional idiot, apparently the organization is trash since they can't even train someone to be a good assasin, and i look in the chapter list and find he also joins the heroes that he hates at the start what a useless background story
5 years ago
33
Flat_Moon
Honestly surprising how fast this novel became amazing.
On the first chapter it gets really gritty, real fast and you just feel like it was just for the shocked factor. After a few more chapter things feel to just fall into place as you just can't enough of it.
There are some misleading moments which I understand are intentionally placed there for your own understanding.
Every chapter feels exciting and brought substance to the Mc's character.
Story development and writing is top-notch with the addition of the generous uploaded.
My only problem is CLIFF HANGER'S
5 years ago
27
LordMirror
Yea... I was warned in reviews but I didn't listen... After going to Japan 10 years trained assassin became unstable emo kid...
Despite being being rude person every girl gets wet being near him. I blame it on 'mc aura' because there is no other explanation.
He kills anything when he gets a chance. Mc more like serial killer because time to time he needs satisfy inner killer...
5 years ago
26
Sage_HiddenBear
This frustrated me. It had a good beginning but by chapter 10 I became disillusioned with it. Its jusy anothrr canon follow with a random oc. His past doesnt matter. In the end you can skip to chapter 10 and just know he has a weapon creating quirk and can short distance teleport. Thats it. The whole i will destory the corrupt society angle is dropped completely. Very bad continuity.
5 years ago
17
DearCompanion
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
8
Master_Changer
Started off really well but the author didn't know what to do with the MC's consequences and instead decided to throw females at him for no reason. The only content besides mc replacing deku and fighting canon is a very unreasonable harem.
The dialogue and grammar are decent enough to carry the story.
Just your average novel on the site. Read if you like 50% action 50% harem.
5 years ago
7
Golias
Well, honestly, the story is not bad, but by the title, I thought it was going to have a terror or steampunk vibe, but it's more of a colorful world, with him in black, it doesn't look like he's painting the world in black, but the The world is painting it colorful. This is not what I imagined, what motivated me to start reading, but I read it until the chap. 24, a criticism must be grounded after all.
5 years ago
7
AzagalPlay
Hold up ! the cover picture is a fortnite skin ???_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5 years ago
5
reqrwq2
Utter trash . Early chapters are bait. From around chapter 20 you will start to understand why this is trash. Mc is another beta doormat parasite loving skirt chaser horny teenager. His trauma doesn't mean anything to him other than nerfing his ability. His assassintion training is meaningless. his clod harsh training is a joke to him now I guess he would even have erection if there was a video tape of the rap.ing of his mother and he wtaches it.
4 years ago
5
Monalishingun
WQ - 4
SoU - 4
SD - 1
CD - 1
WB - 3
NOTE: Read if bored but don't read if you're trying to find QUALITY.
It's sh*t, that's all.
Why?
It's the author's wish fulfillment.
MC is a Gary Stu. Look at Deku and Bakugo, OP quirks but still needs to work hard to improve. Look at Shoto, trained his Ice Half for most of his life, still needs to work hard.
MC/Author bashes Deku too much. Don't go comparing Deku to the OC you made, they're far too different. The OC was old enough to stay resilient and confident to train and sh*it. While Deku for most of his life was sh*itted on by likely first BFF and his peers, of course he'd be too weak to do anything. Also, stop giving Deku's development to the MC.
MC is a CHAD, I don't care as long Uraraka is with Deku. But...
MC fucks a housewife. A wife of someone's whose doing their best to provide for their family, for his beloved and supposedly FAITHFUL wife. If the author made backstory where Mrs. Ashido gets abused and sh*it, then it'd be fine. But no, you didn't.
Didn't the MC's mom get rap*d? For a husband learning that his wife CHEATED on him WILLINGLY is comparable to his wife getting r*pe. What's worse is that a WHORISH women would get half of his hardwork if divorce comes in.
Use your f*cking morals for once instead of your dick. Relationships and death are different, both are everlasting (depending on the person).
Heck, I know people who'd prefer being killed than cheated on.
Then again, Japan and English speaking (main) countries are known for having c*cks.
Anyone who agrees that being a "CHAD" and doing sh*t like this should die or become a monk for 10+ years in a ******** temple.
4 years ago
4
Might_Cho
Writing Quality : 5
Updates : 5 :
Story Development : 3
Char. Design : 2
World Bg : 3
After he see his parent tragic death, Decide to become strong to survive, trained hard by vigilante group as assassin, killing villains and the fake heroes. But the vigilante group who raise him died and he goes to japan to meet the granddaughter of his teacher after his swift and cruel revenge.
I would have give it 4-5 stars if he keeps what he does, nah the MC character dissapoint me, he lost his goal, he just become another Edgy Teenager MC with some sad backstory, while enjoying his school life in UA, eating pizza and playing games.
5 years ago
4
Giant_Sloth
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
3
LickSuckEatMyBut
i knew this would be dropped
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Reveal Spoiler
I only read the first chp: MC has one of the most ****ed up backstories ever....damn its dark.. suggestion: -After what MC has gone through you cant make him wishy washy or naive..only cold as best and mental at worst. -OP MC..lone hero...again because of his past -Add romance but try not make it angst/tragic and dark...Pro MC need a bit of sunlight. -Make MC hate bakugo..bash bakugo [i dont like bakugo] ---HAS POTENTIAL..GOOD LUCK
just another redemption trash thing, earlier chapter had a sad story and how he's able to join the dark star organization the premise is good but here comes why its trash even with 5 years of training as an assasin he's still an emotional idiot, apparently the organization is trash since they can't even train someone to be a good assasin, and i look in the chapter list and find he also joins the heroes that he hates at the start what a useless background story
Honestly surprising how fast this novel became amazing. On the first chapter it gets really gritty, real fast and you just feel like it was just for the shocked factor. After a few more chapter things feel to just fall into place as you just can't enough of it. There are some misleading moments which I understand are intentionally placed there for your own understanding. Every chapter feels exciting and brought substance to the Mc's character. Story development and writing is top-notch with the addition of the generous uploaded. My only problem is CLIFF HANGER'S
Yea... I was warned in reviews but I didn't listen... After going to Japan 10 years trained assassin became unstable emo kid... Despite being being rude person every girl gets wet being near him. I blame it on 'mc aura' because there is no other explanation. He kills anything when he gets a chance. Mc more like serial killer because time to time he needs satisfy inner killer...
This frustrated me. It had a good beginning but by chapter 10 I became disillusioned with it. Its jusy anothrr canon follow with a random oc. His past doesnt matter. In the end you can skip to chapter 10 and just know he has a weapon creating quirk and can short distance teleport. Thats it. The whole i will destory the corrupt society angle is dropped completely. Very bad continuity.
Reveal Spoiler
Started off really well but the author didn't know what to do with the MC's consequences and instead decided to throw females at him for no reason. The only content besides mc replacing deku and fighting canon is a very unreasonable harem. The dialogue and grammar are decent enough to carry the story. Just your average novel on the site. Read if you like 50% action 50% harem.
Well, honestly, the story is not bad, but by the title, I thought it was going to have a terror or steampunk vibe, but it's more of a colorful world, with him in black, it doesn't look like he's painting the world in black, but the The world is painting it colorful. This is not what I imagined, what motivated me to start reading, but I read it until the chap. 24, a criticism must be grounded after all.
Hold up ! the cover picture is a fortnite skin ???_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Utter trash . Early chapters are bait. From around chapter 20 you will start to understand why this is trash. Mc is another beta doormat parasite loving skirt chaser horny teenager. His trauma doesn't mean anything to him other than nerfing his ability. His assassintion training is meaningless. his clod harsh training is a joke to him now I guess he would even have erection if there was a video tape of the rap.ing of his mother and he wtaches it.
WQ - 4 SoU - 4 SD - 1 CD - 1 WB - 3 NOTE: Read if bored but don't read if you're trying to find QUALITY. It's sh*t, that's all. Why? It's the author's wish fulfillment. MC is a Gary Stu. Look at Deku and Bakugo, OP quirks but still needs to work hard to improve. Look at Shoto, trained his Ice Half for most of his life, still needs to work hard. MC/Author bashes Deku too much. Don't go comparing Deku to the OC you made, they're far too different. The OC was old enough to stay resilient and confident to train and sh*it. While Deku for most of his life was sh*itted on by likely first BFF and his peers, of course he'd be too weak to do anything. Also, stop giving Deku's development to the MC. MC is a CHAD, I don't care as long Uraraka is with Deku. But... MC fucks a housewife. A wife of someone's whose doing their best to provide for their family, for his beloved and supposedly FAITHFUL wife. If the author made backstory where Mrs. Ashido gets abused and sh*it, then it'd be fine. But no, you didn't. Didn't the MC's mom get rap*d? For a husband learning that his wife CHEATED on him WILLINGLY is comparable to his wife getting r*pe. What's worse is that a WHORISH women would get half of his hardwork if divorce comes in. Use your f*cking morals for once instead of your dick. Relationships and death are different, both are everlasting (depending on the person). Heck, I know people who'd prefer being killed than cheated on. Then again, Japan and English speaking (main) countries are known for having c*cks. Anyone who agrees that being a "CHAD" and doing sh*t like this should die or become a monk for 10+ years in a ******** temple.
Writing Quality : 5 Updates : 5 : Story Development : 3 Char. Design : 2 World Bg : 3 After he see his parent tragic death, Decide to become strong to survive, trained hard by vigilante group as assassin, killing villains and the fake heroes. But the vigilante group who raise him died and he goes to japan to meet the granddaughter of his teacher after his swift and cruel revenge. I would have give it 4-5 stars if he keeps what he does, nah the MC character dissapoint me, he lost his goal, he just become another Edgy Teenager MC with some sad backstory, while enjoying his school life in UA, eating pizza and playing games.
Reveal Spoiler
i knew this would be dropped hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh