The scince and magic are strongly connected and intertwined this bizzare world. Gnome's world. Where genius of engineering can be compared to some powerful magicians of the storytailes... But what if this world is real? Adventure of common couple of engineers in time of King Artur. What destiny wainting for them? Will see...) Dear readers if you can write some opinions - it will be a pleasure to listen. =)
Not bad. Some comedy/fantasy? Or maybe I"m wrong , but it is definitely somethings fun. Jill is interesting bastard)))) I will look up to next chapters. Good luck!
Awesome comedy moments. Need to develop faster this story, pretty slow. Good, but slow. Need more action!) It my point. Need some war it is magic story or not? Need more development of world background! But in total - nice.
Not as bad as I thought:) I don't know if this tempo will be preserved, but I hope it will be. Good start, what can I say, need more chapters to see the big picture.
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