Re: Isekai Adventure

interesting😋😋😋. Why the story concept is unique and different from the others why? the answer is because fanfic novels usually follow the original canon but i found something new and interesting because mc was born at another alternative time. as far as I'm reading right now, please maintain the growth of the story 👍👍👍. Note [Hm ... As an honored man who loves harems I recommend the story of this novel !!!]. 《Take every milf woman in the whole universe that will be explored mc》

Since I found that many writers have rated and reviewed their own stories, I decided to give a try! In short, this story is a cliché wish-fulfillment fanfic. Not sure if people will like this story, but I hope for you all to try it out before giving your judgment. As expected of this kind of fanfic, the MC is OP and seeking a harem. Other than that, MC will hop to another fictional world/universe in the future chapters. Please enjoy!

I. leave these names from several anime that are good candidates for the harem: -against the gods (https://ni-tian-xie-shen-against-the-gods.fandom.com/es/wiki/Categor%C3%ADa:Mujer). -tales of demons and gods (https://tales-of-demons-and-gods.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ye_Ziyun). - "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). -arifureta shokugyou de sekai saikyou (https://arifureta.fandom.com/wiki/Yue). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc

Seriously WHAT HAPPENED ??? The first novel while the MC was a bit too passive at least it had a plot and the characters were fleshed out, most of all it wasn't rushed and the interaction of the characters (Motoyasu and Naofumi / MC and Raphtalia) was the high point of the novel, but now this rewrite is like spiting on the original idea; the novel became a ****ty downgrade of an wishfulfillment novel without any good selling point, the personality of the MC is that of an uncharismatic spoiled bastard that kills all the enjoyment of the novel, there're no longer a plot, it feels rushed, there're no longer the interaction of characters that was the major selling point of the novel... all in all, this rewrite is a DISAPPOINTMENT

Origial novel was pretty good, decent characterizations, humor, and some fluff. new novel has too many ocs and pointless sex within the first chapters. New character is not as likeable or charming, more outlandish than the original which sucks. Overreacts and gets more involved in pointless politics unlike the other one. People may like this new one, but compared to the previous? No. I was just going to stop reading, but what I really hate is that author uses his original fans to get an audience for this one. People even commented that the original should stay so that it can be read in the future but author says he "listened" and deleted the original and posted over it. Author could not live with his failures and got rid of the old one entirely.

Author rewrote the entire story due to pressure from the comments. However, he made the MC a horrible womanizer with no personality other than "Women are nice, let's collect them all" and yes, he most certainly views them as sex objects and it's explicitly stated like that. That's even his only goal in the entire story. The MC is also just a complete nonsensical asshole. Choosing to murder people who didn't actually wrong him and just lightly annoyed him. I wouldn't rate this so low if it wasn't for the fact that this was completely different and much better before the author caved. If the author improves from here on, I'll change the review.

Yo man I loved the novel why did you drop it?! I thought the original and the new one were good. I do hope you write another Fanfic in the future I think you are a good writer.

I never saw what you say about what travels to another alternative time, but hey, I like how it goes so far, I hope you take the milf queen and the current filoliar queen, and I don't remember more characters xD.

Suggestions to improve interactions between characters do not be in a hurry ######################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################################

Best girl raphtalia = 5 stars.

Please no drop . M

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