Sneaky Snake

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It’s a good story but I just don’t like how he could make himself back into a male which he was originally but decide to stay female... like who the **** doesn’t have a problem with their gender switching? Why did it even happen? Should put gender-bender tag. Wasted some time actually reading this, lol.

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really good .....................................................................................................................................................................................

A fantastic book, one that deserves much more recognition than it got. The book felt comfortable all the way through, with no drama to make me want to run. Thank you for the experience!

At first, I kinda liked the story, it had a pretty OP Mc that wasn't an omnipotent being, the story was going pretty good, there were a few hefty time skips but hey the MC was in development stages. Then the MC became a hypocrite, she doesn't like reincarnations trying to impress younger girls to possibly get them into their harem, calls them pedophiles. Yet, the second world she goes to she gets together with a beast girl child/teenager. She also, rightly might I add, thinks that a reincarnator using a mind control ability on females is rape. In later chapters she proceeds to inject a love potion into a girl who wants to be with her. Now that we have covered the relationship issues I saw, lets get down to some other stuff. The time Skips. The Author has put at least 1 time skip in almost every chapter, some are for a few days, some are for a few decades. Honestly, no disrepect to the author, but this isn't really a story, this a summary. Author puts time skip lines, MC has x and x new powers that she trained, time skip line, x and x powers and knowledge, time skip x and x new family members. I like the premises of the story and a few of the chapters but the time skips are too frequent and cover too dang much. I mean imagine an anime series that basically ever episode there's a time skip scene and then were shown the MC being stronger and more knowledgable two weeks, 3 months, 30 years(these are some of the time skip lines the author used) later. It would be so boring. Also the MC likes to say she is a "sneaky Snake" and that she relies on cunning and trap and long distance attacks, Yet in most fights or anything a lot of what I hear the Mc do is equivalent to "I hit them.....a lot, oh and then sealed or stole their powers".

very good book i like the genderbender to a lamia dont get to see much of non-human snake mcs. and i like how they protrayed the god at the beggining

Really good story, i like the genderbend into a lamia dont get too many of those stories nowdays, character build and the amount of words per chapter where really good also

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