Two girls who have been transmigrated inside the manhwa that they both love to read because of an eclipse, one has an innocent personality, and the other one has a wild and chill part. These two genuine girls are best friends since birth, but what will happen if her best friend becomes her enemy a villainous, and the other becomes a heroine to the story. What would these two genuine girls face through their new life journey ahead?
It is pretty good and it exudes a Yuri vibe to me as I read, not much too say since I'm used to reading similar writings but this novel is the first I've read with a vibe shouting Yuri at me, making me seemingly fanboy at it, good job author, the rate I gave is 4.8 the 0.2 is because I saw some words in their wrong forms but those won't ruin the novel and won't even be noticed by many unless they're spelling and grammar Nazis.
Wow! This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! The author has talent, skills, and a hard worker. This will fare well in the future! Kudos and Congrats! May your novel prosper in the future! ......from review swap.
Story progression is good though I also recommend to indicate more properly when she flashbacks hehe it's a bit confusing but great story so far!! Keep updating author!
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The story is paced very well and the concept is very fresh and fun. The grammar needs a bit of improvement but I can't hate on that. So overall I'd give it a five. Can't wait for more chapters.
A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. There are little to no grammatical errors making this a very easy read. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]
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Finally here's my review! Well although I only read until chapter 52 I will continue to read soon : ) The only reason this ain't getting a five star review is because of the writing quality and the world background that sometimes is unclear. That's all I have of complains but the rest is pretty good. Vendia x Mary
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it is honestly bad. I didn't finish it but, its too fast, and confusing, it doesn't fully explain everything, and Alfa's character is in my opinion shit. all she does is complain. it's boring as ****. good idea but bad execution.
Author, do you know the anime Fushigi Yuugi? It somehow has similarity to it. I think you are doing well so far. Characters are relatable and plot is quite interesting. I would suggest to proofread and do some line editting. Keep on writing and I wish you all the best. 🤗👍
This is actually a very nice story. The setting is well described and you can see that the author put much thought into the characters. Aside from a few edits here and there, I have nothing to comment on the writing quality. Keep up the good work, author!
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