The Elusive Book Keeper
Zane Black, the illegitimate child of an elite family received a diary from his future self. The diary not only detailed his fall into obsession and obscurity, but it also contained a set of requests and regrets.
Incidentally, he begins his life as a member of the Gnosis society, the Universe's largest intelligence gathering organisation, gaining an edge that he never had before. But an edge is not the only thing that he would gain, family, friendships and dare he say it... Love.
The problem in his otherwise wonderful life ... Keeping his huge secret from his protagonist brother who seemed to have huge secrets of his own and more importantly, his lover whose genius was emphasized in the diary nine times. Zane must learn to be smart, discreet and elusive. After all, the worst fate of a spy is to be caught.
Two sticky people, one secret to keep.
Dedication: For those who have been waiting for an action/mystery bl with a heavy side of wholesomeness and romance, this one is for you.
#Cover to be taken down at owner's request!
Love this book tremendously so far. The main character is charming and plays cunningly with his smooth facade. The developing romance is endearing and the introduction in this magical world is well-developed. Definitely one of the gems in Webnovel!
Wow , we have similar beings in our mythology. This made me nostalgic as it reminded me of all mythological beings who are immortals. Thank you author. Keep up the good work.
Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author. Can't wait for more chapters...
Overall a very interesting and good story. I can see where a couple of folks have left comments with suggestions for edits- they looked to be correct, and they'll make the story a little more polished. I enjoyed reading the prologue-type of introduction, and it really set up your story for success in the later chapters, very good use of that writing tactic. The characters' interactions are above average here on WN, and the suspense build up is perfect. Good job, and keep writing, dear author!
Interesting premise, however there are quite a few grammatical errors and punctuation errors. If you can polish your book it would turn the book even better. Otherwise good job!
Hi! Your book is interesting. I'm looking forward to Zane's improvement in the story. But I want more updates. Don't stop here! Kudos to the author!!
There is some good characterization on the characters, I think the plot will go to somewhere interesting. But in the first part there is a hefty amount of info dumping. It might be challenging for the light readers to read though. I think grammar needs some work but else good story.
Off to a food start, the characters are well described and i csn visualize it well. I look forward to seeing more chapters coming out. Keep up the good work!
I'll be honest here, this story is way more interesting than i thought it would be. I feel quite curious about the main character Zane and what's he up to. The plot really makes one want to know more! This book is definitely a keeper! I hope for you to write more as I will be waiting!
First off: Zane, cool name. I like it already lol. The MC's a bit interesting. He's definitely not a hero, but he's not really a villain (anti-hero) either. I haven't seen many MCs like this, so this was a fresh twist. The plot has really just began, but I want more chapters already! Keep it up, author!
I love the story! I like how they took the time to put a cover with the size for it to be posted. I dunno if this a spoiler? Also, how Zane likes to see people. XD It is kinda funny how he examines people. Though, I just stare. XD
I wish depth and breadth were awarded by Webnovel; you'd have a home run of 5/5 star reviews! Your protagonist's first appearance as a well-characterised senior citizen with wisdom, cynicism, and intelligence to match his age, who DOESN'T reincarnate, is a gem... I dare to say I wish to give him a huge hug. As your plot progresses, it rolls out like the an Italian's 'r'. Though there are still grammatical errors after the first two chapters, I am sure they will be corrected when you return to your story in a few months. If you do not wish to wait that long to freshen your view on your writing, another strategy is reading your story as you view it on another device *using a different font size and type* - your slight errors will stick out like a sore thumb (I speak from experience)! I can feel the immense work you put into this novel and greatly commend you for your effort. Sometimes, it can be tiring when all you think about is improvement - you may even slip by the beauty you could create when you do so! My only piece of advice to offer you is to forget the pressure of perfection as you write and live in the love of the moment; I promise that you'll realise you make far less errors. I wish I had more constructive criticism to help you build your writing but I do not. Whatever editing skills you implored for your first two chapters (the Prologue) are exquisite.
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