in my opinion don't make this story a harem I don't know you can make him date a few people but only love one person I don't know if that makes sense.
4 years ago
5
AndyLyn
This is the author's review of his own Fan-Fiction.
In my honest opinion, this story isn't bad. In fact, I believe it to be above average compared to some of the other Fan-Fictions on this site. It has its ups and downs, but I believe that there are more positives than negatives.
The writing quality is better compared to others which are written by people where English isn't their primary language.
The story is at a decent pace, but sometimes it speeds up or slows down to a snail's pace out of nowhere.
I would consider the character of the MC to be confusing at times. Although he may act one way in one section, he would act in another is another section.
However, a major problem it has is that the chapters of this story has an unstable update rate. Sometimes it takes a few weeks for a new chapter to be posted and other times it takes only a couple days. This means that it may take over a year for this Fan-Fiction to reach 50 chapters.
This is all my opinion as a reader, reading through my own story. It is up to you guys to properly discern whether or not you should follow this story.
4 years ago
4
Khun_Aug3r0_Agnis
fun to read , not many people write about of slice of life so it's kinda refreshing 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
4 years ago
1
_Kuma_Kuma_
This fanfic is really good, the way you combined some sports anime worlds together is just amazing and adds spice to the story, the character development, as well as the plot is interesting. I look forward to more chapters
4 years ago
0
Edsil_boysillo
I like the story first is the be a teacher or senpai for the mc and make them good on there play and he will improve them... that all wahahahahahahahahahhah.... good luck go go go
This is an orignal story and even though there is not a lot of chapters im enjoying it. Nobody does a fanfic with being a coach and or these different sports anime/manga.
4 years ago
0
iLustForSleep
I am enjoying this so far and looking forward for more chapters....... . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . .
4 years ago
0
DreamRaven
Nice starting point and idea. The story development for starting is nice and smooth. nothing to say about character development. Interesting world base. hope to read more chapter soon.[img=update][img=recommend]
in my opinion don't make this story a harem I don't know you can make him date a few people but only love one person I don't know if that makes sense.
This is the author's review of his own Fan-Fiction. In my honest opinion, this story isn't bad. In fact, I believe it to be above average compared to some of the other Fan-Fictions on this site. It has its ups and downs, but I believe that there are more positives than negatives. The writing quality is better compared to others which are written by people where English isn't their primary language. The story is at a decent pace, but sometimes it speeds up or slows down to a snail's pace out of nowhere. I would consider the character of the MC to be confusing at times. Although he may act one way in one section, he would act in another is another section. However, a major problem it has is that the chapters of this story has an unstable update rate. Sometimes it takes a few weeks for a new chapter to be posted and other times it takes only a couple days. This means that it may take over a year for this Fan-Fiction to reach 50 chapters. This is all my opinion as a reader, reading through my own story. It is up to you guys to properly discern whether or not you should follow this story.
fun to read , not many people write about of slice of life so it's kinda refreshing 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
This fanfic is really good, the way you combined some sports anime worlds together is just amazing and adds spice to the story, the character development, as well as the plot is interesting. I look forward to more chapters
I like the story first is the be a teacher or senpai for the mc and make them good on there play and he will improve them... that all wahahahahahahahahahhah.... good luck go go go
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This is an orignal story and even though there is not a lot of chapters im enjoying it. Nobody does a fanfic with being a coach and or these different sports anime/manga.
I am enjoying this so far and looking forward for more chapters....... . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . .
Nice starting point and idea. The story development for starting is nice and smooth. nothing to say about character development. Interesting world base. hope to read more chapter soon.[img=update][img=recommend]