GDXS: Laws of Menace

I really liked the concept of the story. Seeing alternate realities in a story is very rare on webnovel. I honestly haven’t seen any of them until now, when I read this. The characters seem interesting, and the alternate versions of the mc as well. This story isn’t a sci-fi story, even though it has alternate realities in it. Instead, it has magic. And magic really tickles my fancy. But there is a major spelling and grammar problem in the beginning few chapters of the story, that honestly made it really hard to read. But other than that, it’s an interesting concept for a story. Thought there is also flaws with the flow of the story, which could easily be fixed if there is more explanations in the beginning chapters. That’s my honest review. Keep on writing author! I’m sure this story will be a banger if done right!

It's an interesting read. I couldn't really get into it though. Writing Quality: Your writing quality is good in some places, but not so good in others. Let's say the first paragraph, for example. The very first sentence doesn't really make sense. Stability of Updates: I don't have anything to say here. Story Development: The main reason why I couldn't really get into the story was because of the development. It jumped from one place to the next, and wasn't very fluid. It was a little too fast for me. Try to spread it out a little, and add more descriptions. What does the main character see? How does the main character process and understand things? Character Design: I couldn't really get a proper grip on the main character's personality. You really need to show what their personality is like through their actions. World Background: The world background is not expressed very well. You had that little bit right at the beginning, but don't spend some time weaving the background into the chapter.

This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!

I am really impressed after reading the first couple of chapters. The characters are really nice, I really like the inner monologue and how realistic the author makes them. A very nice plot too, it doesnt move along too fast, which is nice! A few rocky patches in the first chapter with grammar, put dont be put off this book is worth the read! Lovely work author

Great storyline and plot. Nice story development as well as character development. I liked the flow of the story and the progress of the character discovering himself. Good job author, definitely recommend it.

I find this book very interesting. you can tell the Author really takes their time and gives it their best, and i'm happy to read something just like this, highly recommendable. Good Job, Author!

GDXS: Laws of Menace, this is really an amazing job.. I love the storyline and the character building. Dennis possess a rare gift that goes the contrary norm of the conventional system. I'm curious to see how this goes..since the author has created an enigma in my heart that must be revealed. I want to know Dennis will fight along side the different version of himself in the alternate universes. Kudos, very commendable job.

Woah! the synopsis was enough for me to be in awe. It really gave me goosebumps when I read that he has to fight with himself of alternate dimensions. The plot is really exciting and the fights are described well. I just love the X character he sounds mysterious. Good work author and keep it up.

Super interesting plot, to be honest. I felt quite curious about all the character - each one of them very well written! I love the story and the way you describe it, making it so easy to imagine! Any reader would get hooked from the very beginning. Love it!

Great work Author! I love how the author plays out the story... his grammar is accurate, his use of words so great... I haven't finished reading but I know the rest chapters are great. I will recommend to anyone to read Keep it going Author!

Can I just say that I was so happy when I saw someone having to fight with alternate of them self. It gave me a few vibes like in the Flash and I love the flash so this literally made me love this book more. Keep up the good work.

Interesting synopsis...I read first few chapters and it impressed me a lot...The author's writing style is remarkable...I liked how the author showed Dennis in the beginning of the chapter...Very promising characters...Definitely recommended book...Excellent work, Author!

Doing a great job so far author. Like I find in a lot of writers on here, there is a lack of variety in vocabulary and the story jumps from place to place a bit. I can understand wanting to get the story on a roll, but just remember that a good novel has to have a sturdy foundation! Everything else, especially character design is great. Keep up the good work and I hope to see your novel blow up!

Broo this is great! :D I really like the concept hehe! It felt pretty fresh for meee <3 The start was amazing and filled with mysteries, making me feel like I want to know more :D A lil bit of proofreading would be nice, and the pacing is a bit fast in the first chap, but I still really enjoyed reading this! :D Can't wait to uncover the mysteries hehe! <3