Royalty In Disguise
Inspired by real events
"Mama, I don't want to drink water. It's already so late if I drink water then I'll have to get up again to pee."
"Okay then at least keep this glass by your bedside I don't want to go all the way back to the kitchen to put the glass away," Mama said, a little too angrily.
Asia was taken aback by the harsh tone. Also, weirdly. Her mother looked very strange. She looked unfamiliar in an eerie manner. Asia couldn't exactly put a finger on what was wrong but there was something, for sure.
She, hesitantly, took the glass of water and gulped it down. As she was drinking something, that felt like a snake, the glass caught her tongue and started pulling her tongue down. She dropped the glass to the floor and started screaming and tugging at her tongue. A blood-curdling scream left her mouth. The pain she that was feeling was none like any other she had ever felt. Her mind started to get numb. She wailed and cried but Mama stood there, smiling a bit, not even moving an inch to help her.
All of a sudden, she felt footsteps approaching maybe it was her brother that has came to help her, she looked towards the left to see that her brother and her mother were running towards her, she looked towards her right, stunned and scared to find that where her mother was previously standing, there was no one. She stopped feeling the snake tugging at her tongue. She looked at her hands, felt her face and looked down at the floor where she had thrown the glass but there were no shards of glasses which should've been there.
That wasn't the first time. Asia Chohan had been seeing strange things ever since she took a hold of this new "money". Not only her, but her entire family had been experiencing surreal events that could only happen in their heads... except that it's not. Or are they? Add to your library to find out.
Asia had become a money-hungry, self-serving, ruthless girl after suffering from a troubled childhood. The new money that her family acquired her and her family. But with new money, come new problems. She and her family are seeing, imagining and actively participating in things that are apparently not real. Slowly but surely, the selfish family loses its mind. One after the other bad things, annoying situations start breeding and prospering.
ho is the mastermind behind the destruction of the Chohan family? And is there a bone of kindness that might help them to save themselves or are they just made dark filthy evil hood?
It's... just... so... DISTURBINGLY.......................... BEAUTIFUL. There were literally no grammar error and I'm at chap 12 (I dare you to find one🙄💅) the character development is 😚💋💥👌 EMACULATE! but😐 that house keeper UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES WOULD I EVER TRUST HER! I don't want to spoil it but... her first introduction was enough for me to not trust her. I'm sorry but darling👩🌾 you gotta go.🏃🏻♀️💨🔫😐. ASAP! no rocky 😐 Also the LOVE of money can really corrupt people. Money is just currency (paper, coins etc) Basically stay somewhere between poor and rich. it's best for your mental state Also when Ali ate that man's LIVER... I guess you can say he needs to go to Church and get some... wait for it... de-LIVER-ance 🚪🏃💨🤺 I'm sorry 😔 BUT! (not another 🙄) trust me this one's even better.😏 Let's hope that Ali doesn't get a Job at Amazon or U**... (if this jokes sucks I'm stabbing you😐) damn no need to threaten me... so anyway... I hope Ali doesn't ever work at Amazon so he doesn't have to... de-LIVER packages 😏 😐🔪😨💥💥💥💥⚰️👻 was this review long? yes was it interesting? yes am I somewhat constipated? wait what!? that's none of your business 😐 anyways this is a really fun book 🙂👍
I only read one single chapter and I am hooked though I never read a horror and thriller before but I will definitely read it. I do experiment with reading new genres and I must say it worth to cherish the reading experience.b
a big fan of romance, i at first thought this was one but after reading, i realized it's horror but surprisingly, I'm impressed with the work. Kudos to the author!
Am such a slow reader, I would have given this review sooner. This is what I like to read on online reading apps. The characters aren't that fast paced and the story line is unique, which I admire. The Author is on point. But the paragraphs could be shortened to gain the attention of readers better. Aside that, this book is really one in a million.
Wow. I am speechless. The writing is impeccable. The story is just so very intriguing. I mean, I don't read horror at all but this one was worth a shot. I swear guys, just go ahead and read it. You will not be disappointed!
If there is anything I've learned after reading this novel, it is to not cover things too much. And if there is anything that I have to say about this book, it would be this... Grammar? Check! Suspense? Check! Thrilling? Check! Right amount of intrigue and a little gory? Check! I'm personally a sucker for Hulu stories and this is my cup of coffee so I'm sticking around for more.
first of all, I really appreciate you effort you put into the story. In my opinion, you portray the character clearly from the beginning, I could see various expressions from the writing and it was really good. I think you've done a great job. Keep writing and update more! I am also an author. Please kindly check out my newest novel, Ingeniosus Snilldech Academy! Thank you, I'd really appreciate it :D
I have to say, I am really easily terrified. so I wouldn't normally read or watch horrors. but this book is just too interesting to let go of. there's not too many chapters, but I want more than the thirty that are there right now. author I gift you sparkles (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
Overall, it's an engaging story. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Great job, Author!
I must say, the author has done a stellar job in creating a marvellous world of fiction that one couldn't help but be dragged into. one chapter only and you'll be sticking through out the book.
The first few chapters are really magnificently well-written with vibrant words and intricate descriptions. It brings me closer to the scene where the maid makes an entrance in the story-even accidentally scaring Asia off from her bed! There are a few points that I must voice out. You have a keen bank of words that can bring the life from the story. However, it will be even better if you could check their grammars (such as commas, passive voice misuse, etc.) Great Story, and keep up the good work!
I like of same in fond of this book. A really pretty maid and then the stubborn MC, haha couldn't stop laughing. I barely read two chapters by laughing. it's really fun. I really give all my best to this author for writing such a good and easy understanding story. The explains are good. And the best one is the character. Feel this book is going to be outstanding. Go for it author!! You can do it=-O=-O:-)
At first, I was confuse on the summary so I went ahead on chapter one. I feel intrigued about that mysterious beauty in chapter one that applied as a maid and I thought it's romance but when I saw the tags...it's horror and I want to know what will happen next. Keep up! ^_^ P.S. Just one more thing, It would be better if the summary is describe neatly and put something that can hook the audience. That's only my opinion ^_^
Horror? Yes. Thriller? Yes. Royalty? Yes. My holy water? Trivago. Actually no, someone please tell me where to refill my holy water! I cannot read horror without it! I used all my holy water on BL!
I really love the synopsis!!! It's very engaging and the story doesn't disappoint me! Don't hesitate to give it a try! It's truly a hidden gem! Very well written, good job author!