Power is intoxicating, power is greedy, power is destructive, aeons ago,power was given to one who was trusted beyond measure, and the trust was broken, a dynasty was lost and a family was seperated, soon this family was forgotten and a new generation was ushered,things were going well until I came along, the god that was never supposed to exist, the last one of the forgotten one, they call me the daughter of Zor
I really like this. Like I really really this. Stories like this that are well written and give theIr characters a personality deserve all the love they can get. i really hope this story gets over 2 million readers. it deserves it.
I love it, starting from the blurb to the first chapter and the flow of the story , it's absolutely enchanting , keep up the good work . such a nice plot you have there , ❤..
The synopsis hooked me right it. If you notice, it is one drawn-out sentence that almost crescendos in suspense. The text is deep until we learn that we will be following someone known as the Daughter of Zor. The Prologue was well-written. I love mythology and gods and the opposing Under/Upperworlds. I an excited for the change in POVs. Great work!
Disclaimer: This is a honest review. I have read all chapters (Chapter 6/posted chapter 8) in this story and I like the plot of the story, however there are a few suggestions I would like to inform the author: - some paragraphs tend to be very long and may prove stressful to read for app users. - some sentences are lengthy, as well. Good points: Simplicity of words, easy to understand and good introduction of characters. Noticed that there isn't a lot of vulgar language in the story, which I like. I'll be sticking around to read more. Some sentences are missing a "." at the end but easily fixed. In overall, I like the idea of a 'magical world' and academy life.
It's a very nice story, I highly recommend this. Only the prologue, and you'll know that this is a very interesting story. I'll follow this to the inevitable end, keep it up author.
I love the fantasy element of the story, the characters have good development throughout the story, and it's beautifully written. I'd recommend this book to any fantasy lover!
Wow, finally wrote a review. The synopsis is lit, the introduction is really goosebumps inducing. The return of the daughter of zod, the way the sentence was written made it look so epic. The content is nice, so to sum it up is that this is a nice book to add to your collection of books. The story is nice and well written.
This is a highly recommended one! I love suspense and this is simply the best! The way the chapters have been penned down is commendable. I really like the narration, it's making me to keep reading further.... However the prologue, which was well written by the way, was still a bit confusing for me. But the very 1st chapter got me hooked. I have saved it and will keep reading. Cheers to the author!
Love the overall content and language used in the novel. I especially wanted to compliment the way the author of this book is very specific about the character's POV's. keep it up.
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Amazing work author.. The synopsis is just so so so so great.... Love the way it is written and your book cover is just unbelievable.. Really impressive...
I read all the chapters and the story is interesting till the end. The author put much love in his/her work that's why it's so good and interesting to read. Keep going❤❤❤
I really loved the story. True author has an amazing way of hooking the reader through the use of excellently developed characters and an engaging story with a plot so superb. Stoping to read this story is a real sin. I recommend it to all, it's the best choice you will ever make here.🙂
Definitely worth the read. From the synopsis you can already tell that it will be interesting. Writing style seems advance and the plot seems very original.
Wow!!! What a synospis. Its fully power packed. the author did a tremendous job of reeling the readers in through this. What a story!! I like it a lot!!! Great job author