Heir of the Dragon
Would you like to be the heir of a power that dates back to the beginning of the world?
Mel was a skinny boy living in a mountain village. Although his abilities were limited, he was happy and spent his days experiencing peace in the forest until that day came.
His relationship with the older man who lived in the ruined house outside the village would make him heir to the world's greatest secret.
He was trying to make his way across the river of life in a raft that not belonged to him. Changing with each stop he was dragged into, Mel first knew himself, and the powers he had inherited, and then the order of humans.
It would either rise despite the whole world or be a forgotten detail in the dusty pages of history.
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I hope you don't get mad at me doing the first review and giving full points :) My native language is not English and my translator may have minor mistakes. If you indicate it in your comments, it will be improved in the translation of the second volume. The reason I gave myself full marks is because I believe I wrote the best I can now. Welcome to Heir of the Dragon, the first of many light novels you'll read from me.
I can't get enough of this story. I think this might win for my favorite story of the year, unless it ties with one other story, as the rest so far are not as much fun, fulfilling or fascinating as this one is. It feels fresher for the way it's put together. I'm moved through wide range of feelings. I would love to see drawings from this story because the ones that come to mind are breathtaking from what I've read so far. My only wish is that I could read this in its original language; something is always lost in translation. I look forward to reading this. I wish you, Sanseiu, much success in this story.
[The First Volume] Just short of 5 stars. STORY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). The story is mediocre and can be best described as uninteresting but understandable. Pros: *There are clear objectives *well-defined setting *Imaginative details. Cons: *Slow-paced tells your generic plot. Thirty chapters for three plot points; doesn't happen as much in later volumes. WORLD BACKGROUND ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4 stars). What were they doing while they were speaking, what environment are they in, how cold is the water? Long descriptions are a no-go, but no descriptions are worse than that. They do try though, in the first volume where he was in the cave, they had descriptions and so on, but things get cloudy when the wording comes into play. WRITING QUALITY⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (four stars). It isn't that bad; there are some issues with the wording here and there, but everything's grammatically correct. UPDATE STABILITY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (5 stars). CHARACTER DESIGN ⭐️⭐️⭐️ (three stars). There isn't much attention to other characters apart from the main character, but I hear it gets changed later.
I will shamelessly support a work from fellow writer and a friend, You will be noticing that he will be writing complete and quality stories all the time, Good Luck !!
Yazarın önceki kitaplarını da okuduğum için bu kitabında diğer kitaplar kadar iyi olduğunu görüyorum ve devamını heyecanla bekliyorum umarım en kısa zamanda gelir bölümler
I will shamelessly support a work from fellow writer, so I hope u can get what you want. Also I expect to see a different plot line that’ll be different than normal ones. Do your best and show yourself!
this was so hard to read for some reason and the way you describe things is appalling. could not get past the free chapt sadly not worth it for me.
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I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
It shows that the author isn't a native English speaker. Too bad, I would love to read this kind of story. Maybe if the author got himself a good editor could this story be salvaged.
cover art is good........................................................................................................... that's about it
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idk .