[UNDER MAJOR EDITING]
Ever since I was a child, I can see the strings.
Strings that connect us to other people.
Strings that reveal what we feel towards others.
Strings that can change it's color.
From Red to Black.
Just like love, that can turn into hatred.
From White to Black.
Just like friendships, that can turn into betrayal.
Alice Jade Martinez is an 18-year-old girl possessing the ability to see the fated strings. Working as a matchmaker, she bonds people to their fated partner.
But as nice as it sounds, her gift comes with a curse. She's forbidden to fall in love. If she does, the string's curse will activate and instantly kill that person... She fell in love once.
And he died. That's why she swears she'll never fall in love again.
A novel with overbearing characters. A series of love stories bonded by the fated string.
This is a story about a girl who can't fall in love. And a boy who can't feel anything.
Hellooo readers I'm the author of this book and I just want to announce that this story is under heavy revision. Nothing is change in the plot I assure you, it's just the initial chapters are set back to two years ago. I admit I applied some changes I minimize the humor and cringe gimmicks, replaced with heavy self remorseful pain of my FL. I'm sorry I couldn't inform you beforehand. I tried to put it in my synopsis but the system I'm posting this story with is experiencing glitches, so none are reflected. It might take weeks so I hope you'll be patient with me. I have three ongoing books I tried to update everyday, and even now I'm still trying to cope up with the heavy grief I'm currently dealing with that's why... just give me some time okay? I promise I'll get back on my feet soon enough. Thank you so much for the support (✿◠‿◠)
Honestly its an amazing book. The prologue, with the character descriptions was perfect. Really drew in my attention and gave me a deep understanding into the characters emotional state. Don't think you could have done it any better. Then your descritption are spot on. I truly don't know what else to say besides that it was a great book. Seriously, props to masterpiece author. Keep up the good work!
Amazing! A very interesting way of inserting fantasy elements and the ways in which the red strings are portrayed is amazing. The story's progress allows me to see the author's careful planning. The descriptions and the characters are just wow! Keep up the good work. :D
This storyline is a very well written one, it's simple and easy to comprehend which is something anyone would like. I didn't have any problems reading this story and it was very enjoyable. Keep up the great work author!
I liked the prologue. It's simple and movie-like. The writing quality is good and does its job. Characters have their own personalities and seem pretty well thought. I'll keep track of the story and see where it goes. Keep up the good work author.
If you are looking for an interesting romantic fiction which will hook you from the first chapter, you've found it! The writer did an excellent work of including the fantasy element in the story. The writing style is good. I have already added this to my library and I will make sure to read more. Way to go author! Good luck!
Check out this novel! I really loved it! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
the story is very unique. what do you do when you can't fall in love with another person all your life? i don't know, but i seriously fell in love with this novel. i love every twist and turn. i love every nook and cranny. a flawless narration and interesting characters, it can't get better than this. ♥♥♥ deserves ten stars. ♥♥♥
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I am going to recommend this book to a writer friend, so that she may have more light on what she wrote, as this book completes what she felt, thought and wrote at 17 years old. This is a more mature book. You could interpret this idea as a gift from the writer or character in question. and it can be real or very well imagined. And here the answer, I appreciate this type of reflection, it helps to make sense of what we read, it allows us to make a purpose of improvement in the meditation time.
A fantastic story! The story is unpredictable, it makes me curious with the ending! HAHA! I also like how the author inserts a humorous scene! Keep writing author and God bless you!
Super duper awesome work! ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................. Highly recommended!
This story is quite well made. It has a funny main character, good plots. The story is easy to read, and a lot of fun. The writing quality is a bit off, but with an editor to proofread, you'd be all set to writing a fantastic book. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
A couple of chapters in, wow, a breathtaking start. Firstly, what a lovely novel idea, fated strings and romance, ahh, I love it. Alice is amazing, I absolutely love her and all the other characters, they are so well crafted, dynamic, and also have their own flaws and motives. Very detailed indeed! The whole novel is scenic and has some great imagery, I found when reading I could really let myself sink into the world and the story, it really is beautiful. To anyone who comes across this, give it a read!
The story is very exciting. I got the chills so many times while reading the story. Double plus good. The story is comprises of wonderful characters. Highly recommended.