Kudos to the writer. I liked the plot and synopsis. The setting is too intriguing. I hope to discover more chapters in the future. Fighting author!
4 years ago
1
BlackbellDagger
Overall interesting story, I like the way it takes a unique approach to fantasy genre. The story has a nice flow to it, can't wait for more chapters.
4 years ago
1
AstralGodZero
I have no shame for doing this xD
Feel free to read my story, I believe people will enjoy the plot after a while, I am a newbie writer so give me a chance pls.
I have a lot planned for this story, I appreciate any feedback through comments or reviews.
Just remember to not be too harsh, I am only human and I am trying my best to create a story everyone enjoys.
4 years ago
1
docaqui
the novel is well written.. I just had a bit of a problem with the emotion of the characters... but the novel is fascinating.. i love the flow and how the world build up.. keep up the good work
4 years ago
1
GawS
Good story so far
Thanks for the story author
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Kudos to the writer. I liked the plot and synopsis. The setting is too intriguing. I hope to discover more chapters in the future. Fighting author!
Overall interesting story, I like the way it takes a unique approach to fantasy genre. The story has a nice flow to it, can't wait for more chapters.
I have no shame for doing this xD Feel free to read my story, I believe people will enjoy the plot after a while, I am a newbie writer so give me a chance pls. I have a lot planned for this story, I appreciate any feedback through comments or reviews. Just remember to not be too harsh, I am only human and I am trying my best to create a story everyone enjoys.
the novel is well written.. I just had a bit of a problem with the emotion of the characters... but the novel is fascinating.. i love the flow and how the world build up.. keep up the good work
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