Life and death, one is but a flicker and the other is eternal. One man set out to even the score, to enter the field exclusively belonging to death. Death tried claiming him, but he already had one foot in the door of eternity.
Peace is a lie, there is only Passion.
(Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars or pictures used during this story.)
Very good. Probably one of the most interesting Star Wars fanfiction, if not the most.
I love star wars and this novel is up to my expectations and I would love to see where it would go.
I just hope it doesn't get 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The fanfiction has a lot of potential and is interesting to read. Author are you going to add an A.I in his harem? I am just curious. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////
read first 4 chapters.I can say story idea is interesting and while I may not be a native english speaker grammer of this story didnt fell bad at all while I didnt try to find mistakes there wasnt any that I noticed immediately. writing is fluid. if phase of updates and quality of the story stays the same I dont see any reason this doesnt become well liked. thanks for this work author
interesting ff...
This is my first star wars fanfic on this site and oh boy if i'm loving it . Everything is explained beautifully in detail and still manages to make it sound interesting. I like how you explained the use of force in detail. The MC is very interesting. He thinks rationally and isn't just a goody two shoes so that's a nice change of pace. The dialogues are written nicely and flow with story. The story seems to capture you and doesn't bore you even for a second. The grammar is also very good. The author certainly knows his business and the words are used accurately. Have high hopes for this fanfiction . Please continue the great work .
Really interesting so far. Love the introduction of the MC and the relationship with Belial built. Interesting 'starting' race, hope it's utilized in the future. Insane speed of updates, for now, hope u can keep going! All in all, really looking forward to the future of the novel!
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This is a the best Star Wars fiction I’ve seen to date, hopefully you will continue writing it. The pacing is really good, I’m curious how the future of this story will turn out. KEEP IT UP [GOOD STUFF] hope it still going .?
Are you ok i love you story by the way but you haven’t been active for 3 month are you feel good please don’t be dead 🙏
So far the best Star Wars fanfiction on this site, keeping Doing such a great job. Getting them orochimaru Vibes from the main character. was always interested in This tImeline.
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I love this FanFiction just sucks that it seems like its been abandoned
Honestly, one of the best star wars fanfics I've read. I love that the MC is sith but not crazy and murderous, he twists it to his desires. I also like how he incorporates advanced AI from his world to create a strong droid army. Truly a fantastic novel. I can't wait for more.