Glitched Heart

Glitched Heart

Sci-fi48 Chapters64.4K Views
Author: Hellifrit
4.89
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Xing Tian, an amnesiac 20-year-old backpacker arrives in the city of Faunus as her final traveling spot. On the first day in the city, she encounters a battlefield of soldiers and inhumane creatures called Glitches and becomes involved in the war between humans and monsters. With the device known as [Antivirus equipment] she obtains, can she end the war between human and Glitches?



*Volume I finished.* *Hiatus until end of burn out*

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_Aniv

The narration was exceptional. The perks of being a native speaker. Although not all native speakers are well verse in grammar so I appreciate the author's supremacy among others. The story was interesting for me so this novel will surely garner attention in the near future. I am not much of a critique and I say this is outstanding for me. Kudos!

3 years ago
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Fritziest
Fritziest

Amazing. This book makes a lot of points. Great character qualities and a very good plotted story. I liked how every paragraph is worded just enough. I enjoyed it.

3 years ago
1
TofSpades
TofSpades

How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked! Keep it up author.

3 years ago
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Yvette_Celia
Yvette_Celia

I like this story so much! I enjoy reading it and yeah, i really like it. The author have done a good job in writing this story. So, its a 5 star from me

3 years ago
1
mathepid
mathepid

While there is world building at the start, the introduction of Xing Tian as the ‘Asian girl’ is a bit disconnected in the first two chapters. It is systematically written and there is a lot of hard work done on the novel. The novel probably belongs to the cyberpunk genre . Just a personal opinion on my part, it is a nuance but each new character generation tend to be a little choppy at the start. This choppiness isn’t a grammatical issue but rather how the content flows. Fight/combat scenes while described, requires more action, shorter description to give it an ‘action’ feel. However it is my personal preference. Others may prefer in depth descriptions. Overall, nice work!

3 years ago
1
ElaryWakefield
ElaryWakefield

I love the whole idea of this story and the world-building. I can't wait for more! I love the use of they in the first chapter. I also feel the 2020 simulation feels a bit like last year. It was all so strange. Like nothing was real.

3 years ago
1
Proteety_Promi
Proteety_Promi

The name is quite catchy and you get the main concept of the story from the synopsis as well. So far I read, the story has potential and if you keep working on it, I think it will be an amazing piece of work!

3 years ago
1
kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_sora

The concept is fantastic! Although I have only read few chapters of your book, I was drawn inside that world! The only few points that I'd like to point out is the usage of tenses (since you started with past tense, I think you should use past participle words.) and filter words. Besides that, I think this novel is going to be fantastic!

3 years ago
1
mrant12
mrant12

Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.

3 years ago
1
kpthe1
kpthe1

First of all the wrting quality of this book is excellent. It is clear making the story more engaging. The plot is smooth and story is very unqiue. I can say this is a perfect Sci-fi book. With the stable updates this will become great!!

3 years ago
1
Talal77
Talal77

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3 years ago
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KiaoSuvan
KiaoSuvan

This is a ver good read though i find some wording to be strange i think the Premise have great potential with a lot of mistery and action. this story is very solid and is worth a read for sure.

3 years ago
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Erfan_Sh
Erfan_Sh

The plot was interesting and great. great characters development. This web novel is amazing. keep up the hard work, author........................

3 years ago
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