WPC #188: Bronze Winner
["So miss System, how can I become awesome"
"Host you cannot become awesome"]
Success was surrounding me all the time, I was Rich, Handsome, and a Playboy. And you know what, I was always surrounded by beauties.
Then one day, my life took a nightmarish turn.
"What the fuck"
I was in a body of a monkey. Bloody GOD had me incarnated in a body of Monkey!!! Where is my Handsomeness and...
At least he should have me incarnated in a body of Fox or a Peacock. I should have shown my awesomeness, a cute Panda is also fine.
Follow the journey of a self-centered narcissist man, who wanted to become awesome but became a GOD.
P.S: Image used from this source
https://www.deviantart.com/vesner/art/Monkey-Death-Ray-297852108
Hey, Reaper here, its one of my starting novel, so there may be some mistakes here and there, pls comment for it, and enjoy the book. Your reviews are most welcome
The thought of him being a Playboy then made him reincarnate as a monkey was hilarious.haha 😂. You do know how to be a comedian with this one. I can see this is a half finished novel as I can still see that it still needs editing. Still, it didn't bothered me to read the story. I hope you release more in the future. 👍
the concept is very good but the mc is like sanji but very stupid, the mc literally just thinks about "beauties" and it got old after 4 chapters. other than that the chapter length is short which isn't bad.
This is a mess . A BEAUTIFUL mess ! i have a lot of Fun reading this as the writer make things very interesting. This is a fun twist on the genre and is very entertaining.
Chapters are VEry short. messy plots and issues. Also i just gotta point out, super rich guy who is bedding several hot ladies still not happy with his life and wants more woman so he can be more awesome??? Like WTH??
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Review: Very interesting story, chalked full of excitement. I love the characters and development of the story. From beginning to end the story is truly unique. It grows on you as you scroll each chapter, the mc has a very dynamic set of skills and he utilized them to his full potential. The hesitation in the beginning by the mc is expected of anyone going through such a change of station. The leveling system worked well with the mc’s development and was simple enough to understand. A good story through and through… 🦍👌🏿🤘🏿🤙🏿👍🏿👍🏿
so far have only read the discription but I can feel this is gonna be good since from what I can tell there's gonna be a lot of "reject humanity return to monke" memes And this books gonna be a giant bucket of laughs (will update review when I read the book right now I'm reading some other books so this is going in my "read later" folder)
Dropped chapter 2 First chapter give impression mc is intelligent due to being a consultant and multimillionaire that quickly changes into him being given millions due to death of parents And dialogue is terrible
English is probably not the authors native language, and I understand that. Some grammar and stuff have to be changed, but it is fine. The character design is hilarious, him being rich and a narcissist but reincarnating as a monkey.
Everyone this book clearly teaches us why we don't click on weird link. It's a great story, author really described the guy right. But it's kind of funny. Loved to more of the monkey adventures
so far it's very good and i'm involved in the story if you disregard the english errors it's ok but the bad thing is the delay to release new chapters
an interesting novel with very authentic characters. the use of profanity is nice giving a more down to earth reaction which is unique. all though the character doesn't feel like she has much to them
Truly a fun one! Hero being a playboy and reincarnated as a monkey was a great idea! Writing quality is definitely good. Looking forward for more fun! Keep them coming
Honestly, this story is absolutely brilliant. Vulgar and offensive. Also blasphemous and I don't agree with it at all. Definitely a story that can make you hellbound. But brilliant nonetheless. It is hilarious through and through. You are really talented and should keep up your writing. The development is also solid. But you really chose a bold topic.