This Is Where I Want To Be

This Is Where I Want To Be

Fantasy224 Chapters152.6K Views
Author: illiterateLilac
4.49
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In modern America a teenage vampire/alien and four men's lives intersect into an ultimate reverse harem. Haunted by a past and a fascist ruler of her home planet, she battles her enemies to achieve her goals in life.

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TheSpixa
TheSpixa

I’m not too versed in novels surrounding werewolves so please forgive me if my review doesnt sound accurate. From what i can see, reading those 60+ chapters, the story as well as the author has really progressed! I felt that the first chapter was a bit shaky in terms if grammar and word count (which is common since all authors have to start somewhere, right?) but as i continue to read, the writing quality has improved greatly. Moreso, the plot has become clearer and more understandable. This is a definite read for readers who like slowburn in this genre. Cheers, author!

3 years ago
3
Akira_Monadelle
Akira_Monadelle

This novel has a very solid plot and beautifully structured characters. I was extremely confused at the begin because the flow, sequence of events and transitions were a bit jumbled. As I read on I slowly started to understand what was going on. There are a few grammar errors including punctuation mistakes especially with the full stops and a few spelling errors. These were also seen in the synopsis. Overall, this novel is a good read and has the potential to be great. It's drama/romance so I'm looking forward to the mushy mush and the crazy mysteries 🤗

3 years ago
3
Brandongould
Brandongould

I want to preface this by saying I am a male and normaly do not read romaces nor have much inset to how they normally are written so this mostly opion I did not mind the story, It was intresting enough to hold my intrest and there were parts that with some more detail could bring more insight to charters and the commpond was intresting and would be good to know more about as well as the extant to her abiltys and how the vampires race is dying, are vampires a normal thing that is accpeted in this world or is there something else. But with that aside I will make sure to contue reading to see what happens next

3 years ago
2
Brownex
Brownex

3 years ago
1
JI_Ah44_LEE
JI_Ah44_LEE

After seeing the book cover, I wasn't really interested but something drew me to this book. The teenager vampire deeply in love with a married man had me hooked. I love this book but I think to get more readers you should try changing the book cover. Over all the book is great! Epic... I love this! Keep it going dear author, you did a great job 👊👊

3 years ago
1
Rayne_Rue
Rayne_Rue

Let me start by saying werewolf novels are great and have a lot of creativity to be done so for the author to jot down something like this is a huge step to take in, love the characters from the chapters I was reading so far everything was fine. can't wait to see this book grow!

3 years ago
1
Ice_Princesss
Ice_Princesss

What I loved the most about the 20+ chapters I manged to read (cause there's a lot of chapters for me to still read) was the fact that we don't just get the POV of many characters. I ended up not just liking our teenage vampire, but the other beings she met. Well done, hope you get the recognition you deserve. I'm adding this to my library.

3 years ago
1
Reo_
Reo_

From what I've read, the plot is interesting as well as the characters, but I found myself a bit confused from the first 3 chapters I read. But that changed after few chapters. Another major problem I had was with punctuation mistakes, but you can fix that. The novel was I good read I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!

3 years ago
1
Darine_ALRAMMAH
Darine_ALRAMMAH

From what chapters I have read, I enjoy this story. There is enough description in these chapters, that I feel like I am aware of the situation. Yes, there are a few grammatical and punctuation areas that could be edited, but even the best have some flaws. I am definitely going to keep up with this story and where ever it may lead in the future.

3 years ago
1
Brian_Hanes_117
Brian_Hanes_117

It's a good story. It has interesting characters though I think it could use a greater variety of characters from the chapters that I read. Decent description, though I think it could use a bit more. Especially description of what the characters look like in the story. The grammar is solid and I like the smooth feel of the story. I also like how it is an easy read.

3 years ago
1
MayDreamer
MayDreamer

The plot seemed fresh and unique at first but because of the grammatical mistakes, it was very hard to understand what's going on in the story. The characters were well described but not in such a way that we could visualize them, but no worries you can make it better slowly. My advice, Don't force your story instead let it go with the flow.A step after step or it will look like a mess. You might not like my review and the rating but still take it as a lesson and do better next time. My wishes are with you. Good Luck Author!!

3 years ago
1
Luminous_Arcadian
Luminous_Arcadian

It was an interesting story. The characterization and the story's development were nicely done. I like that it's written in the first-person point of view, but it sometimes gets confusing, especially with the narration. The first few chapters weren't that clean, but it gets better as it goes on. I noted some grammatical errors and misuses of punctuation marks, and there were also a few typos. It would be better if it could be under a few revisions and fix those errors. The story is good so, I hope that the author would take some time to smoothen the chapters. I wish the author the best of luck!

3 years ago
1
WhiteVest
WhiteVest

It's an interesting read. I like the main character and the first-person narrative. Very good world-building and character design. the author did a great job.

3 years ago
1
gaijsnsn
gaijsnsn

This story is really intriguing. Definitely had me reading on for more. You did a good job on making the characters as well, you can tell they are planned out. Keep it up, Author! Sorry I'm bad a reviews, but everyone reading this should try out the story!

3 years ago
1
KayLillyt_1
KayLillyt_1

A great story. Well written and well paced. Certain parts of it are very realistic which is great. The story moves along and takes the readers along so well and so smoothly. Very worth reading. Well done author.

3 years ago
1