Vampire's Obsession
"kill them, kill them all.
Bring out everyone's heart
Burn everything so that no one can escape from here " ...
''Please have mercy on us, we are willing to serve you as your slaves."
Slaves Hahahaha! 'God' did you see I am having fun.
you have taken away my mother I will take away your children.
...
'Worship me! humans."
*** VAMPIRES AND LUST ARE A COMMON COMBINATION SO *******
[ some chapters may have explicit scenes but
if in case anyone has any problem please skip this novel]
when a vampire is more obsessed with a girl than his thirst for blood.
In the year 1950, a table massacre was going on in a village. A pa pureblood vampire was standing there enjoying this massacre ...
Not too far away he saw a woman fighting with many vampires all alone like a 'one-man army'.
Anyone who sees her once can tell that she must be a witch but the pureblood thinks she is not a witch.
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"She tasted sweet, like oranges, liquid sunshine in my mouth as we kissed, our tongues playing together."
''Darling why your lips were swollen
, Did anything bite your lip?" Smirking Majesty held her close ...
''It's because of you," She glared at 'His Majesty.
Her Majesty slowly caressed her lips with his thumb then put it into his mouth and lick that thumb slightly, ''Your lips are tasted so good, I want to take a bite one more time."
She ran back to her room holding her blushing face.
"It seems like I haven't been expressing the intense feelings I have been harboring towards you."
(The Cover is not mine)
The book cover is fantastic as it made me excited to read the novel even before opening it. I also like the way how Gabriel is described. It's a mix of mystery and fear.
Very intriguing start. Well done author! The pace, word building, writing style are all good. It's still in the early phases of the story, and I look forward to more chapters from the author!
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So let me start by saying, the book cover alone made me want to read it and when I did I just had to keep it, am a huge fan of vampires so this book got me smiling, the ruthless vampire made my heart swell 😉keep up the good work author.
I've never been a fan of vampire based novels due to it being an over used genre or if used written about like some sloppy Twilight romance knock-off. But this is more gritty. Well done to the author for using a horse instead of flogging a dead one.
The story is amazing, I enjoyed reading the entire novel, so please keep the chapters and never leave it be. The characters are lovable for me, especially since I love this type of setting in a story. but... I don't mean to offend you or anything, but update the chapters and learn how to use correct punctuations.
Twilight meets Beauty and the Beast! Love Elsa already and I'm barely ten chapters in. Her pure innocence is honestly so refreshing! I can't wait to see how her personality contrasts with our MC. A small complaint is that there are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't ruin the overall reading experience. Honestly, I'd say it doesn't even matter, especially when the plotline is so interesting. Great work author!!
Your style creates a sense of fear and excitement in the readers mind. The character design is just perfect. I am eager to read more of this novel, i have it has a lot of plot twists in store! The book cover is on fire! I got interested the moment i saw it. Added to library! I hope you exceed my expectations!
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Amazing start! And that's rarely a common occurrence among new novels. Nothing to say about the stability of updates, author is doing well. Characters well crafted thus far, easy to connect to them. World background also well developed. I can't wait to see more. A good read overall, keep it up, author-kun! I'll be looking forward to read what's yet to come.
I think everything about it is great; the authors writing stile, characters description, intriguing plotline, coupled with the attractive cover. I'll rate this novel five stars.
Amazing start! Exciting premise and the characters are portrayed realistically and are easy to connect to. I can't wait to see more. A great read on a lazy weekend. Good luck, author!
The story of a witch and vampire is really intriguing. Your writing is marvellous and the story plot is awesome. I really like the twists and turns of this story. I am looking for more chaps and recommend everyone to give this story a try.. you will love it💜😊 All the best and keep going author.🔥
Gabriel’s narcissistic personality really mirrors a pureblood vampire. His obsession to the girls gaves a mysterious effect to the novel. I really love how you described his personality. Keep up the good work author!
The world of vampires with the dark theme has always been my fav this story already got me hooked up not gonna lie. The MC is really scary T_T but still cant help to fall in love with him! cant wait to read what happens next!!