a 14 year old boy named Eden with an unknown disease that will break his cells at his 18th birthday gets involve into an organisation with plans to restart the world by destroying it. follow Eden and his friends as they try to stop the world destruction and searching a cure for Eden's disease. between love,friendship,action,adventure, and tragedy Eden will never stop to run from his fate that makes him a true
Running death boy.
- = talking
- - = thinking
abc = narration
it's only the beginning so i can't really go into details but it seems like a slow start story with a lot of potential tho it does have some flaws like the characters are not really described etc.. but we'll it's not the author's language so maybe it's because he doesn't know much . but anyways if my opinion changes afterwards I'll change my evaluation
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