Marvels Darkseid

shame its harem .

Ugh another trash harem novel to check off my list [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I love this fanfiction please don't drop it 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Just don’t waste your time reading this as the author has issues formatting or just likes writing walls of text. Dialogue is similar and there isn’t much to differentiate different types of viewpoints when there are at keast two people talking. Tldr: dont read not worth time

I am giving 1 because it is based on Dark Seid. But Mc without a character is not worth of my time. Story development is worse and has no goal. [img=faceslap]

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Love it so far never be discouraged, and keep writing cant wait to see what happens next[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

mc without personality, he goes to marvel and occupies a body and does not even suffer from it a psychological or logical change, some initial time jumps without explaining what mc does or reasoning, he goes to insult a group of guys for no reason and gets beaten and when the parents tried to solve the problem in a legal way, he says no it's my battle and it ends there, the parents listen to mc as if it were a command and do not reply or anything, after possessing the body no one has noticed its change or at least not nothing is explained, does mc have the darkseid ability? no has a system that gives him the ability of darkseid and it seems he can control his power very simply and give powers as if he always did when he has no memories to test what he can do or whatever, the explanations and dialogues are minimal and uninteresting seem summaries, short and poorly developed chapters, novice author and even with little knowledge of marvel or the powers of the characters

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Sweet darkside i hope you post more 👍

Can you please update your story please. It is really good so far. You haven’t update in around a month can you please update. 👍👍👍👍👍👍🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃😀😀😀😀😀😀

Ok good ability mc. Keep updating it! [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I just think that him acting like a complete brat and everyone just accepts it to be rubbish. Going around giving powers like that is foolish and should never be done. Logan is still loyal to the professor and a simple button press doesn't change it. Also I would like to remind the author that darkside is not all powerful and has been defeated many times.

So good! Please don’t drop!