[The story will resume from 1st of March]
[Currently under heavy Editing. I will be back sometime in the future once I am done with editing the starting chapters through and thorough. Sorry for the inconvenience.
(No. of chapter Edited 0/100)
Although the major errors are like in the first 30-40 chapters, I will still look a bit further for smoother reading experience. The errors are highlighted in a pinned review.]
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'Every Mistake has a price'
Visca, a playground for the 'Gods', is a world where 'Gods' nurture their champions to fight for them.
Reincarnators, Transmigrator, Regressers, people with system and other cheat characters, all roam the world of Visca.
Then, HE was brought into this world.
And THAT, was the mistake the 'Gods' shouldn't have done.
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Disclaimer:
He reincarnates in a world that has its own laws and rules.
A vast world where different species rule over different kingdoms.
A world where magic decides your future.
There is danger lurking everywhere.
Thousands of secrets undiscovered.
What happens when a genius among geniuses reincarnates into that world with only a pathetic amount of magic within him?
What would happen to someone who only wanted to live a plain life with his wife and family?
What was the reason for his reincarnation?
and what will he do next?
Find out as you follow a magical journey of myths and Legends, as threads of fate unravel themselves at the hands of the 'weakest' mage.
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[Chapter 1-18 is 0th ark. (A form of intro ark) It has many information dumps and there could be grammatical mistakes in them, so please bear with it.
Chapter 19+ is the first ark. It is where the main story actually starts. Thank you for coming here]
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Other important points:
•This isn't a weak to strong type of novel.
Our protagonist is strong from the beginning.
The story would revolve around him and his brothers along with the future allies and the choices they make as they explore the world.
•The first 18 chapters will have a lot of foreshadowing, world-building and other explanations. It will cover at least half of the world area that you should expect to be explored in the future.
•Also, you might feel like it started somewhere from the middle with so many things going on in the background and that's because it is so...Don't expect things to finally kick into motion after the MC appears...
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[I do not own the Cover and if the creator has any issues, please message me at deathscavenger97@gmail.com I'll credit or remove it]
Since many Authors do it. I'm gonna do the same. A question and answer review. (*ignore the 5 stars). So if anyone has any questions related to anything, don't be shy, ask away. I'll be more than glad to answer your queries. Have a happy day ❤️ May happiness finds your way. 😊
I'll be real, the story premise is really good. The only problems are constant change of POV, OOP flashbacks and redundant POV. If I describe this novel, it's like holding a bunch of strings with varying lengths with POV attached to the end and dragged onwards to create a story...
So apparently if uou stick to it it's a vood story... and the premise is nice, but oof the writing style is wanting. It's not bad English or anything like that. It just feels like the author slapped some words on a piece of paper and moved on. No flavour. Calling it a writing "style" is a stretch. But if you don't care about that, go ahead and read. The story is better than other stuff I've read (so far).
I dropped because there is like 30 characters POV on those nobody care about 25. And POV swap 2 to 5 times per chapter. + sometimes its for the same event ? sometimes 2 peoples talk to each other than we switch POV to have the same dialogue over again with the other one POV. It can be good from time to time but you find this at least once every 4 5 chapter.
well i found this in my daily recommendations and thought about giving it a go for 20 min and here i am after using all my fast passes for the day .....pretty good read actually....[img=recommend] #OP MC # hiding true abilities# reincarnation(?) #Gods #kingdoms #Demons #Pragmatic MC #Proactive MC #Multiple transported individuals(?) #systems(?) #Caring MC............
this story is a Total gold.. character design is great and everything is just amazing for me... keep it up author 👍 u have created an awesome story.
The novel is beautiful. I like the characters and their growth. The world is also well structured and as the story progresses it becomes more and more interesting.
Exceptionally great so far. Syntactically a few things might be changed but in general, the story streams exceptionally pleasantly. Some of the time it may be a bit surged but keep going, Really good so far. Well done author!
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Very good so far. Grammatically some things could be changed but overall the story flows very nicely. Sometimes it is a bit rushed but I believe transferring worlds is really hard to do in a fluid way. Overall a great novel and much better than a lot of the higher ranking titles.
In this story you get the overpowered character quality while also having interesting characters and reactions to the main character! The story is also coherent so far! It's really good. My only gripe is the constant pov changes which I strongly dislike. It makes it confusing as to who I refers to if you happen to forget the one line at the beginning refers to.
the story is gold just need more chap daily and the storys should keep going at this pace,author just dont disappoints us. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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Really good so far. Well done author! Keep writing and keep posting. Don't give up. Will be waiting for you to post more chapters! Keep up the good work!
The strong character and an unique story, are very good. Highly recommended for all of you who like reincarnated story. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Although this story might start slowly, the author wants to create a solid basis on which the plot will begin developing. Nevertheless, it's easy to follow, the main character is interesting, and the setting is full of diverse magical elements, races, and characters. Recommended.