Primate Murder Through a Multiverse

It's alright. Writing quality isnt the best, but it's readable. The author writes like he's simply writing a short dairy on the events. Like "so and so said this, so and so said that, so and so said this again, so and so said that". There's not really many descriptions on things like the surroundings, so it'll be best if you have prior knowledge on the worlds used in this fanfic. Otherwise, it's good, I suggest giving it a read.

I came here for FOU but instead I got a harriot potter MC like bruh wasn't FOU THE MAIN CHARACTER

Dear Author, I personally do not mind the story too much and find it rather humorous but I wish for you to change the title as something like “as primate murder I shall guide protagonists” or something. I was looking for an op protaganist demolishing worlds or fixing dumb plots not this. Don’t get me wrong the story is fun enough and I’ll still read it when I have time but the title and description gives a different… vibe than what the story portrays

Keep going bro! You're on fire! Keep rocking it! I'm waiting for the next chapter!!! Wkwkwkwkwkkwkwkwkewkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkwkkwkwkwwkkw

I really wanted this story to be good, since I love the premise of the MC having Fou's body, unfortunately it just isn't.Most of the 'story' is just filled with status screens, item/skill descriptions and info-dumps, that are completely unnecessary for any fan of the Fate series.The actual story is filled with some of the most cringe fanfiction topes (like a comically evil Dumbledore and Weasley family), that most people are long since sick of.

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A great start with an interesting character instead of just the normal reincarnation with OP wishes and all that .............................

This is one of the best if not the best FanFiction on Harry Potter worlds were there is a female Harry that I’ve read to this date. The update speed is quite slow but it is better than a lot of novels that I’ve read before, there is some grammatical errors here and there but not common the world background or info dump needs to be heavily reworked, since in most cases he says a brief description of said power then sends you to a wiki for more info just give a short and concise answer. And there is some numbers that need to be fixed in the old chapters getting switched around and such you could go back and edit a chapter or two most comments are people taking note of incorrections though out the book but all in all it’s in the top 3 Harry Potter books I’ve read that has less that 50 chapters can’t wait for more you have more talent for writing than I think you give yourself credit for👍

it is good

I'm not really verse in HP and Fate, but here's my perspective; It's an awesome story with a good not fast nor slow development, comedy is only so-so it can make you smile but that's only it explanation are pretty good but please refrain from adding a lot of (),#,{} and [] since it's kinda distracting not gonna lie, but overall it's a good story to read. Definitely recommend it. Here's my review[img=recommend]

I'm redoing this, just so people can know that; Yes, I'm posting on here again. Head to Volume 2 for the rewrite version. Thanks for your time, any feedback that you can give to HELP me improve would be great.

The novel itself is pretty good, I like the flow of the story. The only problem I have is, The character development of the summoned heroes. Example Merlin and the anime and the mango. It was more expressive and much more annoying. The West was the same. Ignoring that detail the West was pretty good.