My Three Yandere Wives

First I would like to say thank you for stopping by and trying my novel it means a lot to me who has loved light novels for years and wanted to try and make one myself. Second This is my first original novel so please tell me if I made any mistakes or how I can improve as a author and make this story better for you guys! Thank you.

Just wanna come back and state that the true plot begins on chapter 45. The 44 chapters were just a introduction and a funny way to start off my novel and have you guys meet some main characters. There will be more important characters later on so please stay up to date with the chapters. Thank you so much for coming this far with me, I have had a blast writing this book so far and I don’t intend to stop anytime soon!

I’m brand new to webnovel and I have always loved books seeing a fresh and new mc that differs from the regulars mc’s really made me want more of this novel. So author please release more

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

Personally think that the story would have been MUCH better if u had time skipped to when he was like 13 years old instead of him going around being an idiot at 5 years old :/

well....it is good but suddenly he gone premium. so sadly im gonna dropping this........................ .............. ...................

First and foremost I love the world building in this story and the character motivations are amazing. What stopped me after 28 chapters was the writing. I couldn’t see myself spending coins to continue the story.

I scored most 3stars other then character development. I can’t get over the fact that a 6 year old is out fighting a wolf with a carving knife. No one seemed to care, I mean sure this is a different culture. Things might pick up later but between this and the rate of release it’s just not worth my time.

too many plot hole and writing qulity is just normal but i really a funny and i really love this novel %^^///////////-----//////////

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Overall 5/5 and im lazy at writing a review as i essentailly written a 1271 letter rating to a friend that want's me to rate it as she/he can't choose what book to read.

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So far this is a great book. It's still in its early stages, but the story is interesting and has potential. Unfortunately, the chapters don't come every day, but I still wait patiently for every release and hope that the story will continue and won't be dropped.