Needs very, Very, heavy editing in regards to dialogue and point of view...............................................................................
2 years ago
28
ASHBORN
His power was quite good. The proceedings are good. But I don't like catching girls like Pokémon. Usually I like harem but this one doesn't.
2 years ago
21
Transhumanist
Not bad, but you need to find a good beta reader. The writing quality is pretty below average. Especially dialogues are badly done. Thank you for the translation .
2 years ago
17
ThongLover
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2 years ago
12
Paul_Laa
The story is great but please change the name of the Mc. I literally chocked on my coffee when I saw the name....................................
2 years ago
8
PetrickSetar
rubbish story , rubbish translation . Pokemon hunting harem without any deep engagement. messy universe even though it's AU it is still messy,
what op? he's training inside his "mind" how the f he get the battle experience ?
2 years ago
4
Yeison_Betancourt
Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel?
2 years ago
2
LaughingArkBuilder
I'll give it to ya, you did a good job with translation. The story is great too, and I want to read more.
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2 years ago
2
Blackwater
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2 years ago
1
Invictus6
Its pretty good just alot of cringe moments where im sitting their thinking what did i just read?
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To THE TRANSLATOR-
1. Writing Quality - It is average but can be best if it can used it proper grammer like we don't know somtimes how MC or Male/Female characters becomes SHE/HE(GENDERBENDER?🤮) and if there is a scene in future where MC or any character shouts his/her attacks please change it(Chunni?🤮)-
*For you are Translator right- kindly make it better in quality as well as story than the original Novel.
2.Story development - Quite good going in a medium pace is best.
3. Character Design - I mean everything is going on well Especially on MC's Martial Arts, Shinobi Arts, Shinigami+Hollow side but Why has not HE(MC) learned Magic and Chi yet or is it not there in the original story?
It would have been a feast to read that if the MC creating a new techniques like absorbtion+Copy skill(Absorbing criminals or harming people and copying only the people around like gaining all their abilities and memories) also creating technique like-
with all he has learned+adding Magic,Cosmic energy,Chi and all other energies combine like a cultivation technique.
*MC making earth resource infinite and saving nature(Eliminating pollution) , making the planet Larger+connecting all land masses together with infinity stones for future development taking preparation in advance for population control etc.,
4. Updates Stability - Very Stable 5/5. Atleast you get one day rest.
5. World Background - Good but would have it better with good writing quality and little modification if the translator can! I know Translator can do it.
For THE TRANSLATOR CAN make it better than the original Novel.
Thanks-
Reader.
Needs very, Very, heavy editing in regards to dialogue and point of view...............................................................................
His power was quite good. The proceedings are good. But I don't like catching girls like Pokémon. Usually I like harem but this one doesn't.
Not bad, but you need to find a good beta reader. The writing quality is pretty below average. Especially dialogues are badly done. Thank you for the translation .
Reveal Spoiler
The story is great but please change the name of the Mc. I literally chocked on my coffee when I saw the name....................................
rubbish story , rubbish translation . Pokemon hunting harem without any deep engagement. messy universe even though it's AU it is still messy, what op? he's training inside his "mind" how the f he get the battle experience ?
Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel? Where else can I read this novel?
I'll give it to ya, you did a good job with translation. The story is great too, and I want to read more. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Its pretty good just alot of cringe moments where im sitting their thinking what did i just read? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
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To THE TRANSLATOR- 1. Writing Quality - It is average but can be best if it can used it proper grammer like we don't know somtimes how MC or Male/Female characters becomes SHE/HE(GENDERBENDER?🤮) and if there is a scene in future where MC or any character shouts his/her attacks please change it(Chunni?🤮)- *For you are Translator right- kindly make it better in quality as well as story than the original Novel. 2.Story development - Quite good going in a medium pace is best. 3. Character Design - I mean everything is going on well Especially on MC's Martial Arts, Shinobi Arts, Shinigami+Hollow side but Why has not HE(MC) learned Magic and Chi yet or is it not there in the original story? It would have been a feast to read that if the MC creating a new techniques like absorbtion+Copy skill(Absorbing criminals or harming people and copying only the people around like gaining all their abilities and memories) also creating technique like- with all he has learned+adding Magic,Cosmic energy,Chi and all other energies combine like a cultivation technique. *MC making earth resource infinite and saving nature(Eliminating pollution) , making the planet Larger+connecting all land masses together with infinity stones for future development taking preparation in advance for population control etc., 4. Updates Stability - Very Stable 5/5. Atleast you get one day rest. 5. World Background - Good but would have it better with good writing quality and little modification if the translator can! I know Translator can do it. For THE TRANSLATOR CAN make it better than the original Novel. Thanks- Reader.