Mobster With a Broken System Wants to Dominate the Underworld
Elliot Amom was just an illegal fighter in his country. But because he suffers an injury, he is forced to stop fighting and will have to use a cane for the rest of his life. While still sinking in despair and hopelessness, he receives the news that his brother has died. Trying to make a good life for his brother, Elliot Amom was kidnapped, and held captive for years.
When he was finally released, he was killed. At death's door, Elliot Amom is given a second chance. Elliot awakens in his bed years ago, just before his brother was killed.
With a look of surprise and suspicion, Elliot notices that there is a translucent screen in front of him!
*Ding!
Welcome host! Please do the tutorial missions and unlock new system functions!
Now that he has received his chance, Elliot has the chance to get revenge and redo everything he did wrong. He won't waste his new life!
In a world that seems to have stopped in the 80s with cyberpunk elements, what will Elliot do to achieve his goals?
Chapters per week: 5 Sunday, Tuesday, Thursday, Friday, and Saturday
Every 100 power stones, +1 chapter
Every 500 coins +1 chapter
Don’t stop writing this novel plz it’s amazing story
Hi guys, this is Dukkha, the author of this novel. I wanted to clarify a few things that some of you may have been in doubt about. This story has no harem, there is romance and kingdom-building. Some people have commented that at times the story was fast-paced and unclear, I apologize for that. Finally, my first language is not English; unfortunately, I have no one to help me. I hope everyone has a good read!
Absolutely the best novel of this genre that I have ever read, the story is top notch and the characters are well made, and the world is interesting and well made even though it is only the sixteenth chapter I am already absolutely hooked to this story. But if I had to say one bad thing that would be the typical reader problem of not enough chapters :( but do not take that as an insult or something like that since I totally get that putting out more than a few chapters per week or something like that is not possible with this kind of writing quality. This would be the first novel that I would be willing to pay for chapters even though I usually do not do that, but if possible would definitely prefer that it would be free. Keep up the great work and keep writing:) all the best to you.
so after like chapter 7 there are alot of time skips and sporadic gaps in the story. simply making the story way to fast pace to keep track of the story's concept has alot of potential, but to many gaps.
Eu li até o capitulo e 28 e goste! .......................................................................................................................