The Guide of Evolution
The decent of the seven energies had the world in turmoil, and because of this the human race had to be sent to other worlds.
The seven energies began to remold the earth
but about 30+ people were not affected by the summoning seeing this the world forcefully dragged them to a demonic realm with caused them to dive into endless slaughter
.
After the remolding of earth, superhumans, cultivators of all sorts, demons, buddhas, gods, and all sorts of fantastical creatures appeared on earth.
And with that the human race faces many challenges and many challenges ahead, Tristan Clay who was also dragged to the demonic realm was suddenly struck by lightning and got a mysterious guide
Soon after he realized
that it was a guide that would drag him to mysterious worlds witch forced him to evolve into an ultimate being
.
But he would soon realize he wasn't the only one for the other 30+ people who went to the demonic realm was also forced into this predicament.
Good story well structured writing hope see more of you keep writing people will love it
Ehem this is the bestest book you'll read i promise You know its gonna be funny its gonna be heart breaking you'll even understand the meaning of life here This is my fist book but not the last enjoy this
Although I wouldn't say it was the finest novel I've ever read, it was still rather good considering it was your first. The noises were the only thing that bothered me; yes, I realize that you repeated them to let the reader comprehend that they were sounds. I thought some of the laughter was inappropriate, though it may have just been "ha ha" or "haha." Some noises also were. The ticks rather than repeat could of be "the tick repeated over and over again." rathe than tick tick tick tick.
I read quite a few chapters to come here and write a review. There are a few places where the sounds and the grammar sometimes disturb the flow of reading, other than that, I think this novel is going pretty well. Update consistently and I think this novel has the potential to become something great in the future.
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You have such a great story going. I'm enjoying the build ups and character development. Keep up the good work, but I do encourage you to go back and make some edits for the weird Grammar and "Where's your capitalization?" freaks.
It's actually pretty great and I stumbled upon this book a few days ago good luck on your story because it really has a lot of potential. I Love your work and really recommend it
The story is good. I like how he calls himself king, when he obviously isn't all there is right now XD The writing could use some work. Maybe get editing software? There are free ones. But story-wise, this is solid material. I'm adding it to my library :) Keep doing the good work :)
I love your work, never stop writing . can't wait for more
on the first chapter...there are some mistakes in punctuation that causes confusion in understanding the sentences .. however the story seems to be promising....so I'll give 5 stars (◕ᴗ◕✿)
your story seems nice and interesting, more like a mega movie. I enjoy reading the synopsis and it seen attractive.
This novel is one to keep, because the plot is very structured and prepared. The development of the book isn't all over the place but it's in one conga line, and that helps keep the reader interested.
This novel is new but it sounds great. Loved the book and cover. The plot is super. The writing style is awesome. It is easy flowing. Great work author. Carry on we want more!!!!