TRASH TOO MUCH NONSENSE WITHOUT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT MANY INFORMATION WITHOUT EXPLANATIONF IT WAS EASY TO READ BUT YOU WRITE WITHOUT EXPLAINING YOUR MAKING THE READER HARD TO UNDERSTAND
2 years ago
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Arman_lesmana
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2 years ago
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ArdaPendragon
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TRASH TOO MUCH NONSENSE WITHOUT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT MANY INFORMATION WITHOUT EXPLANATIONF IT WAS EASY TO READ BUT YOU WRITE WITHOUT EXPLAINING YOUR MAKING THE READER HARD TO UNDERSTAND
Good next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next good
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