The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .
2 years ago
61
Tasha_Williams_0673
It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.
a year ago
12
Trojan_HeartVirus
Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou.
O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18.
Por favor autor não largue!!!
a year ago
2
MOON_LIGHT_5653
Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I
a year ago
13
Arthur_ErosGod
Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
10 months ago
6
andika_liauwan
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2 years ago
3
Malikim
GOOD FANFIC
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2 years ago
3
Who_are_you_
is this still being updated ?
Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.
2 years ago
2
Ariel_Martinez_6484
bro can You opdate more faster [img=update]
a year ago
1
ILikeSaltedEgg
best 🥰🥰🥰
I need more but spy x family....
2 years ago
1
Diky_Maulana
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2 years ago
1
Ben_EZz_Here
Excellent perfect unique creative outstanding entertaining wonderful very well done author
2 years ago
1
naroootoo
I love it so much ..........................................................................................................................................
The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .
It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.
Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou. O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18. Por favor autor não largue!!!
Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I
Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
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is this still being updated ? Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.
bro can You opdate more faster [img=update]
best 🥰🥰🥰 I need more but spy x family....
Like this one 👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻
Excellent perfect unique creative outstanding entertaining wonderful very well done author
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