The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .
2 years ago
81
Tasha_Williams_0673
It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.
2 years ago
16
Trojan_HeartVirus
Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou.
O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18.
Por favor autor não largue!!!
2 years ago
2
MOON_LIGHT_5653
Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I
2 years ago
17
Arthur_ErosGod
Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
a year ago
9
andika_liauwan
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is this still being updated ?
Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.
2 years ago
3
i_love_H
good good vary good .............................................. ................. . .... . . ...... ........... .. .... . . .
2 years ago
3
Malikim
GOOD FANFIC
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2 years ago
3
Shapla_Easmin
I'm rating this book 5 stars because it has great story development mc don't lick Tang san and don't let go any female mc .I really want this book to continue and have a perfect ending . sometimes the story update is late but i am great full Because it did not got abandoned . overall it is a heram book with greatest story I have ever read .so please don't abandoned 🙏🙏🙏 this story. if you have problems in your life we can understand because everyone one has good and bad time we only ask that if you have problems you can take a break but please don't abandoned the story we want a a perfect ending .
2 months ago
1
Ariel_Martinez_6484
bro can You opdate more faster [img=update]
2 years ago
1
ILikeSaltedEgg
best 🥰🥰🥰
I need more but spy x family....
2 years ago
1
Diky_Maulana
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2 years ago
1
Ben_EZz_Here
Excellent perfect unique creative outstanding entertaining wonderful very well done author
The fic would have been much better if the author used a normal guy instead of an old disgusting man . It's a huge turnoff . not everyone has old man fetish , it is a very questionable taste . Every dude giving 5 stars is very weird .
It would be 5 stars if it wasn't a disgusting old man. Please change the looks it is too disgusting to imagine.
Muito bom 😊 eu sempre volto para conferir se o autor atualizou. O MC é um velho tarado com sistema, não é minha primeira vez vendo o tropo bastardo feio em uma fanfic, mas esse foi um dos melhores no quesito, fetiche e R18. Por favor autor não largue!!!
Disgu sting Low Life You Should K ILL Yourself (Contains CLO Ne, Net O Rare, Net O Ra Se) and he doesn't change the Main Character’s appearance even after he got the Blue Silver Emperor’s Inheritance. Man Don’t use some else’s character for something as fil Th Y as this. Contains full blown Y U R I
Disgusting old man makes this story disgusting 🤮 If that’s ehat the author tryin to achieve, you have definitely exceeded your goral🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
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is this still being updated ? Also it is a good creation although slow/not being updated at all.
good good vary good .............................................. ................. . .... . . ...... ........... .. .... . . .
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I'm rating this book 5 stars because it has great story development mc don't lick Tang san and don't let go any female mc .I really want this book to continue and have a perfect ending . sometimes the story update is late but i am great full Because it did not got abandoned . overall it is a heram book with greatest story I have ever read .so please don't abandoned 🙏🙏🙏 this story. if you have problems in your life we can understand because everyone one has good and bad time we only ask that if you have problems you can take a break but please don't abandoned the story we want a a perfect ending .
bro can You opdate more faster [img=update]
best 🥰🥰🥰 I need more but spy x family....
Like this one 👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻
Excellent perfect unique creative outstanding entertaining wonderful very well done author