Pretty good start! Some typos and grammar mistakes but they are minor.
a year ago
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TheGreatOldOne
It has good potential if you can improve the writing quality and grammer and increase the maturity of the character slowly and gradually you can get more than a decent novel.
Pretty good start! Some typos and grammar mistakes but they are minor.
It has good potential if you can improve the writing quality and grammer and increase the maturity of the character slowly and gradually you can get more than a decent novel.